| "Charlie's Hikaris" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Twas a cute chapter...
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Reviewed By: shgfdf On: April 11, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay. dancing. anticipation is building. the only thing i'd point out is that you could work on your spelling/have somone edit it. it's kind of hard to read.
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Reviewed By: stabstabstab On: April 10, 2005 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your plot is really creative and you have a nice "flow" i enjoy reading it (not that you really care) i just want to know why malik seems so much more prissy and girly than the others.
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Title: Too Lazy to Log in
Reviewed By: Crystal56 (lazy to log in) On: April 10, 2005 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Luv the chapter!
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Title: How Cute!
Reviewed By: Yugis-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute! Yugi is so sweet! I cant wait for the next chappie! Bye-Bye!
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Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Alright, Yugi's was cool! Cant'wait to read Malik's!
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Reviewed By: kuramas_protectorlove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good but work on ya spelling and grammer
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Title: Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yugis-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Malik should be next. Yugi should be last. Whateva ya think. Bye-Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 06:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you should do Yugi's interview last! Awsome story, I'm really bummed I havn't read this before. Ah well at least I'm up 2 speed now. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Niiiiiiice! I love it! I think you should do Malik before Yugi, now.
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Reviewed By: VamPyro On: March 27, 2005 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story on FanFiction, and its awsome. Please write the next chapter soon! ~Rae-chan
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Title: kw425c
Reviewed By: Yugis-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is awesome! I want Jou to be the next one. Seeya!
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Reviewed By: Yugis-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
this storys cool! I choose Room 1, with Yugi in it.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Silver-diva-goddess On: March 10, 2005 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totaly Amazing fic I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! I think you should do yugi or balura first because they are the most innocent . PLEASE UPDATE u are a totaly AWSOME WRITER ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *gasp* TEASE!
Reviewed By: AOTS On: March 09, 2005 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-weeps- How cruel, you tease~! I wanted to see what Jounouchi and Malik would do! Would they help their friends, but appear to be continuing the show? -smiles silly at the images of misunderstood touches- and I was so excited to see the yamis' reaction!! Oh please update soon, so I can find out!! It's practically driving me up the wall! -cries harder- *Assassin of the Shadows
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