| "What are these Memories?" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Title: kool
Reviewed By: salee On: October 04, 2005 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im really gettin into the story.you must of taken you a long time writing it and having all these great ideas.i hope you write another chapter!keep it up!^-^
|
Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!!! ^-^ lol u ask why we like it....um.....idk...ur a really good writer!!!! ^o^ Ohh, but about the story w/Sasuke not having his clan destroyed, I wanna read it! **makes a puppy face** lol ;P Itachi as an art teacher!!! Now that would be the sight!!! lol! ^o^ I really wanna help give u ideas...but to tell the truth I don't have any.....lol sorry ^o^;
|
Title: n_n
Reviewed By: kasey On: September 14, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice
|
Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 13:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's looking good so far!!! ^^ I honestly think you should ignore that list you made in Chapter 16 or something and just keep writing 'cause it doesn't really make a difference, and even if you make a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, it's probably so close to what you mean that people don't even notice. (like me) ^)^ My elephant Elli loves your story too, for what it's worth. :-D
|
Reviewed By: Sacria [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Yuugi-Chan, I just wanna say I am really enjoying your fic. I was just wondering if you might wanna make Itachi even more possesive of Sakura. It would perhaps bring forth an amusing scenario of Sasuke being slightly jealous...mwhahaha XD ...anyway enough of me just babbling away. I like your fic ALOT and I think the Sasuke/Sakura/Itachi idea is really cool! Looking forward to your next chapter! Sacria
|
Title: nice...........
Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it and theres nothing wrong with sakura being strong and all... I'm just a little confused with itachi, because in the flashbacks he seems to be nice and his relationship with sakura growing the why in the hell does sakura hates itach that much?! well i guess i have to wait for your next chapter do i? and another thing i think it needs a little more romance..with sakura and the uchiha's..... i already told you whats in my mind it only means that i really like your story so please dont stop i really hate it when that happenssss:)
|
Reviewed By: zelai02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 08:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice story really! I can't wait for your update. Don't get fustrated over the Itachi OOCness thing, many made him OOC already. In fact no one knows exactly how he thinks, based on my friends ofcourse. I can't imagine Sakura being strong and all but its a nice thing for a change. Keep up the good work! and update soon!^^
|
Reviewed By: Whiteviper On: August 03, 2005 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic. Ummm...Itachi's personality, I can help with that. Let's see... Emotionless, always glares, quiet (you got that one right), only other Sharingan users can look into his eyes, but I guess Sakura's an exception. Sasuke reeeaaallly hates him. Oh, I'm not sure, but I believe there are only nine members in (I forgot the name...) Amkut something... That organization. I can't wait to read the rest!! Keep up the good work.
|
Reviewed By: Deviant666 On: August 01, 2005 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a good fanfic. I enjoyed the "mental breakdown" bit. Keep it up!
|
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, this is very good so far. I agree with the person below me though, it has a lot of dialouge and not very much descriptive action. Other than that I don't see too much wrong with it. I'm very interested in seeing the next chapter (which I hope is longer ^^) If you ever need any help or anything, you can e-mail me! Lol, I know that's strange and there isn't much to need help with, but I just wanted to throw that out there : ) ~~~ kyuubi.sharingan@gmail.com
|
Title: .....
Reviewed By: ; 0 On: May 22, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN WILL BE THE NEXT CHAPPIE? ihope to read it very soon...
|
Title: Oops.
Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Er, me again. Forgot to add this in my previous review: I don't understand why Sakura would leave off the honorifics when she's pissed at Sasuke- Last I checked, lack of honorifics revealed intimacy, like that of a spouse or relative. So why she'd drop it when she's pissed is beyond me. And anyway, don't put a lot of unnessecary Japanese into a fanfiction, unless it ties significantly into the plot (like the lack or change of honorifics). A lot of readers don't know what the hell you're talking about at times. || Once again, have a nice day, and keep up the writings! ^-^
|
Title: Well, suffice to say, that was interesting.
Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, you do need to write longer chapters. You don't have to leave people at a cliffhanger when you want to get them addicted- All you need to do is have a good story. Cliffhangers aren't the world. Next, I suggest either putting an OOC (Out of Character) warning in your summary or reading up on the character's personalities, lest you be swamped with flamers. This story has potential, but there's too much dialouge and everything moves too quickly, or haphazardly. I found myself not enjoying it very much- If I wanted to see a physically strong female protagonist, I wouldn't look for Sakura, so I again implore you to put an OOC warning in your summary. Keep up the good work, though, and try to work more on descriptions and the like- You could wrap all six chapters into two, the way they are right now. But I wish you only the best, and hope you take my words not personally or offensive, but constructive. ^-^
|
Reviewed By: sazchankagebunshinojitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very cool hope there is more
|
Reviewed By: inuyashalove04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 03:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, just wanted to tell you that I like your fic so far...you're really good at leaving people hanging. Can't wait 'til the next chapter. Good work.
|
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
