"What are these Memories?" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: nice........... Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 03:10 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i really liked it and theres nothing wrong with sakura being strong and all... I'm just a little confused with itachi, because in the flashbacks he seems to be nice and his relationship with sakura growing the why in the hell does sakura hates itach that much?! well i guess i have to wait for your next chapter do i? and another thing i think it needs a little more romance..with sakura and the uchiha's..... i already told you whats in my mind it only means that i really like your story so please dont stop i really hate it when that happenssss:)
| Reviewed By: zelai02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 08:58 CDT Comment/Review: Nice story really! I can't wait for your update. Don't get fustrated over the Itachi OOCness thing, many made him OOC already. In fact no one knows exactly how he thinks, based on my friends ofcourse. I can't imagine Sakura being strong and all but its a nice thing for a change. Keep up the good work! and update soon!^^
| Reviewed By: Whiteviper On: August 03, 2005 13:46 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this fanfic. Ummm...Itachi's personality, I can help with that. Let's see... Emotionless, always glares, quiet (you got that one right), only other Sharingan users can look into his eyes, but I guess Sakura's an exception. Sasuke reeeaaallly hates him. Oh, I'm not sure, but I believe there are only nine members in (I forgot the name...) Amkut something... That organization. I can't wait to read the rest!! Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Deviant666 On: August 01, 2005 01:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Quite a good fanfic. I enjoyed the "mental breakdown" bit. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 04:03 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: hmm, this is very good so far. I agree with the person below me though, it has a lot of dialouge and not very much descriptive action. Other than that I don't see too much wrong with it. I'm very interested in seeing the next chapter (which I hope is longer ^^) If you ever need any help or anything, you can e-mail me! Lol, I know that's strange and there isn't much to need help with, but I just wanted to throw that out there : ) ~~~ kyuubi.sharingan@gmail.com
| Title: ..... Reviewed By: ; 0 On: May 22, 2005 23:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: WHEN WILL BE THE NEXT CHAPPIE? ihope to read it very soon...
| Title: Oops. Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:56 CDT Comment/Review: Er, me again. Forgot to add this in my previous review: I don't understand why Sakura would leave off the honorifics when she's pissed at Sasuke- Last I checked, lack of honorifics revealed intimacy, like that of a spouse or relative. So why she'd drop it when she's pissed is beyond me. And anyway, don't put a lot of unnessecary Japanese into a fanfiction, unless it ties significantly into the plot (like the lack or change of honorifics). A lot of readers don't know what the hell you're talking about at times. || Once again, have a nice day, and keep up the writings! ^-^
| Title: Well, suffice to say, that was interesting. Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: First off, you do need to write longer chapters. You don't have to leave people at a cliffhanger when you want to get them addicted- All you need to do is have a good story. Cliffhangers aren't the world. Next, I suggest either putting an OOC (Out of Character) warning in your summary or reading up on the character's personalities, lest you be swamped with flamers. This story has potential, but there's too much dialouge and everything moves too quickly, or haphazardly. I found myself not enjoying it very much- If I wanted to see a physically strong female protagonist, I wouldn't look for Sakura, so I again implore you to put an OOC warning in your summary. Keep up the good work, though, and try to work more on descriptions and the like- You could wrap all six chapters into two, the way they are right now. But I wish you only the best, and hope you take my words not personally or offensive, but constructive. ^-^
| Reviewed By: sazchankagebunshinojitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 20:35 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: very cool hope there is more
| Reviewed By: inuyashalove04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 03:13 CST Comment/Review: Hello, just wanted to tell you that I like your fic so far...you're really good at leaving people hanging. Can't wait 'til the next chapter. Good work.
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