| "The female fox" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME FIC!! I SO LOVE IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE SOON!!!! AND CAN YOU PLEEEEEEEAAAAASE MAKE THIS A Kurama/Kagoemfic? PLEASE!?!?!
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Title: CONTINUE
Reviewed By: Vampire_Bride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello there it has been a while since I have reviewed.. I had thought you had abandoned this stor...... Yay you updated wow I was the first to review huh been a while.. Keep up the good luck.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 23:09 CST
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Well the plot is good, but the paragraph spacing is really funky, it'll end in the middle of a sentence which will continue several line spaces down making it rather irritating to read. Like for example; I mean I know what Inuyasha This above should be all 1 sentence without the 5 line spaces between them & really 1 or 2 line spaces is fine, 5 is a bit much since it's just wasted space. I'd go take a look at some accurately paragraphed fics & see how to do it correctly if I were you because you don't seem to know how to correctly split things up into paragraphs, like when the speaker changes.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 22:23 CST
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thank you for the update, now so you dont forget again i would like another chapter for my birthday on the 13th. also how did kagome become a demon? and where did she get training?
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Title: I Like This Story
Reviewed By: Stebba On: September 10, 2008 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh I really like were your going with his story so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good story so far
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
why did you leave it thare? but scence you left it thare please update soon!
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Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
pleas update
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Reviewed By: Mcmllnchrstn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is good Please update soon
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man y u got 2 go and leave it off like dat up date soon its 2 good 4 u not 2
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think chapter 3 cut off sweetie ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is looking good! I love to see fresh blood writing about my favourite pairing! Some con crit though- please check your spelling and when you're using speech, take a new line. It makes it easier to read is all, and I wouldn't want people to be put off from reading your story when it has much potential! ^.^
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good pleease up date soon
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. you should write alot more chapters. that was funny and fun to read.
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