Reviewed By: Ama-chan On: February 20, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa I'm oover whemled by three things( and it's only the first the cchapter) 1) The uniqueness of the couple. Inu-yasha fanon contains everything from Inu+Kag to Seshoumaru's dragon-thing and a bike, but I've never seen a serous Souta/Kohaku fic before. You have my respect 2) the character death. That was Kagome, right? Poor Inuyasha... 3) Your writing style. It's beautiful. Not only is everything spelled write but it flows and is beautifully descriptive. Just beware over using the word "trekking." All in all a fantastic fanfiction. Please update soon and thank you for writing.
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