| "Rhyme & Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 05:46 CDT
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hey skip, I just had to say that this story is absolutly driving me nuts! what's going to happen?? I wanna jump into the story and help poor veggie...but I woun't be able to do that untill I've made my latest invention, bummer. |
Reviewed By: Skipbillion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2002 21:03 CST
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Ack, ch. 5 IS missing! How did that happen? Thanks for pointing that out, I'll put it up right now and that should explain one or two things.
And thanks for you questions and comments! It's probably a good idea to mention Trunks in there somewhere. How nobody's really noticed it yet, well, there's denial for one thing and the fact that all the selves are very good at acting like Vejiita.
Thanks again :P
Skip |
Reviewed By: zorella On: April 02, 2002 15:21 CST
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I had a thought last night, how did Craig get to earth? or did i miss that bit? Mind you, chapter 5 was missing @_@. Also, is Golden-eye coming back? I think he should, in a few chapters anyway. Last thing; what about Bulma and trunks? I mean, sure Bulma knows what's wrong with Vegeta (took her long enough :) But what about Trunk's view in all this. His father's got a serious problem, yet he doesn't know about it. All he knows is that daddy hurt him bad. I'm not putting anything down here, but I'm just saying that doesn't Trunks have a side to the story? Even if it's a just a few paragraphs, I think it'll add a bit more depth into the story.
Still, Rhyme and reason is in my fav top 5 of all time, next to The Nine Month Saga and Soul Under [which was never finised :( ] |
Reviewed By: zorella On: April 02, 2002 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's been so long since I've read a fan fic that i've gotten so involed with. Your idea about the whole different personality thing is so original. At times it can be a bit confusing, but that's the great thing about the whole story, it makes you think and become involed. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2002 06:30 CST
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This is great! You have got to let me have this on my site! I think it'd do excellent! I'm looking for some good fanfictions for my site and I'd like this to be one of them. Hit me back at veggietrunks@hotmail.com plz! Peace!
Veggie-Trunks |
Reviewed By: kookie On: January 02, 2002 18:27 CST
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Just excellent and worth the wait!! I thought chester might have a little "bi" in him and you wrote rob well...I'm eager to see how things work out from here!! |
Reviewed By: kookie On: December 11, 2001 22:32 CST
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Yea! I've been watching for this next chapter and I love it! Excellent writing and content--I can't wait to see how veg and the others are going to deal with all of it!! |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: December 11, 2001 21:45 CST
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Uh-oh, Rob's come out to play! Excellent chapter. I like the part of Vegeta cutting on himself, but that's just me. And damn that stupid Gokou, "He's dead, uhhh, almost.." Moron. I hope that stupid cat has some senzu beans. This chapter poses a real problem, doesn't it? If V. were human, he'd have to be institutionalized indefinitely. The guy IS sick, after all. Unfortunately, he's also an interstellar bad-ass who can go SSJ2! I hope you handle this with care and don't have everyone thumping on poor V. The scene with the wrist wounds bothers me...V. committed suicide once allready. I hope it's not a sign of things to come. Looking forward to more!!! |
Reviewed By: kookie On: February 12, 2002 20:13 CST
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Just excellent! I was so afraid you'd stopped writing. It was worth the wait! |
Reviewed By: Yukineko (chibigypsy@galaxypolice.com) On: November 24, 2001 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This got to be one of the most original character angles I've ever seen! I would never have thought about Vegeta having MPD, but once you think about it, it does make an odd sort of sense. The writing is suberb, and the concept even better.
Bottom line: Fiction of solid gold. |
Reviewed By: Yukineko On: November 24, 2001 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This got to be one of the most original character angles I've ever seen! I would never have thought about Vegeta having MPD, but once you think about it, it does make an odd sort of sense. The writing is suberb, and the concept even better.
Bottom line: Fiction of solid gold. |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. Definitely a unique prospective of why Vegeta is such a complex and intriguing character. I really love what you're doing. The coolest thing about it is that it fits so well with him to have multiple personalities. I really hope that Bulma and Kakarotto can help Vegeta get better. |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: November 23, 2001 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most ORIGINAL insights of Vegeta's character that I have ever seen. And the most tragic. Poor Vegeta! I hope that Bulma quits her bitchin' and realizes that this situation is serious and tries to help him (instead of encouraging that snooty Rhys dude to stick around)! I thought that Chester was in charge of all of the others! I REALLY liked the drug angle, because we all know that our V. would NEVER go for illegal substances. I hope that becomes a topic in the story! I hope that you get the next chapter out quickly!!!! |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 05, 2001 19:24 CST
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Hello. I've been reading your story, and I think this is an interseting idea. I wrote a chibi-vegeta fiction that diagnosed him with MPD (multiple personality disorder). This is similar, neh? I always thought he was a little... traumatized myself. ^^ Your potrayal, however, is different than mine... I like the parties you write up. It's a look that makes me compare it to modern-day parties of teenagers. (sadly) You incorporated mass wild behavior with loose organization... Clever. And Vegeta not remembering... that's
different .... "Disassociating" I believe. Don't misconstrue what I say! (I just reread it and it almost sounds like I'm accusing you of copying me! Oh, no!! +_+ That's not what it's meant to sound like!!!) I only mean that I agree with the concept!! Anyways, my story's not posted that far on mediaminer yet... It's all still on ff.net. I wish I could contact you on AIM or something. ^^ I bet we could have some interesting conversations! ^^ Oh, yeah! And keep up the story. Very interesting. Nice overall effect. (You were going for empty-angsty-spooky, weren't you? ^^) That's all for now!
G.S.- over and out! Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: November 15, 2001 23:35 CST
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A long time ago when I was studying psychology, I remember this paper on MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder) about a young boy who was kidnapped and raped for months and to cope he created an imaginary identity in order to dissociate from the abuse. As he grew to adulthood, each facet of his personality, good or bad, fractured into seperate individuals, all complete onto themselves. What you've done with Vegeta is incredible and has never been done before. I hope that the other Z Fighter's, especially Bulma, clue into his illness and help support him. |
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