Reviewed By: Shapeshifter On: February 22, 2005 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall I liked your fanfic a lot. Nice idea, Inuyasha seems like the kind of guy that would be leading a gang doesn't he? One thing that would help improve it is to put spaces between the paragraphs and times where the scene changes. Makes it easier to read. Update soon!
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