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| "Haunted" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: May 5-14 Not that long!!!!!
Reviewed By: rin^^(NLI) On: May 14, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It hasnt been THAT long scince you last updated. I love how Kagura and Kaede are related, and now Kagura is off to Tokyo to find Mr. Higurashi, wont she be surprised when she discovers he's Kagome's Gramps. I was kind of hoping to see Tsubaki fight The gang but I supose I can live with one less major battle to look forward to. Are you planning on making Kouga and Kagura a couple? Just wondering because I need to brace myself, I'm kinda a sess/kag fan. I just realized that Kagura and Kagome have the same 3 letters...Anyway! Great chapter! Will Eri, Yuka, and Ayumi find out that the "Other Guy" is InuYasha in the Next ch? Or will it take longer. And What would happen if they find out Kagome likes Inuyasha, would they try to get them together?............I'm just asking random questions, you dont HAVE to answer....
| Title: Deffinantly not
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off, the compliments! GREAT CHAPTER! I love how you had Inuyasha and Kouga fight. I thought you had Kouga's character almost perect. Now, I think the "SIT" thing would work ok if you used it at simpler times, but if you use it too much (like in most other fics) than it seems like Kagome has to rely on the command to do everything with Inuyasha. It would be nice to see her solve some problems on her own, but the sit command could still be used. You already put it in there, you cant just get rid of it. Beside, if you use it too often you have to pain yourself with describing exactly how kagome uses it. You already have so much work to do, simplify a few things!^^'
| Title: sit
Reviewed By: Kiana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you keep the \\\'sit\\\', I\\\'d only do it if she screamed like she did the first time. It\\\'s far too overused in other fics, and like you said, poor Inu has enough on his plate already.
| Title: Great Moon!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didnt review last chapter, but both the last chapter and this one are wonderful! I didnt expect this turn of events, they're going to be there alone?! Wow. I also like the scene with the spell. I wouldnt mind trying some of Miroku's cooking, it sounds interesting!^^ uhhh, I'm sick today and smileing like I am is giving me a headache. Hope you update soon. Bye.
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 04:36 CDT
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LOve it! What is Nuraku's plan?....Its just so aluring! I like the Inuyasha Kagome scenes! What will happen next?! Hurry and Update! I gotta know! .....(I just realized I was babling).....
| Title: It was awsome as usual!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 20:08 CDT
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I'm very happy about how you did this particular chapter! I never expected that turn of events! PLOT TWISTS ARE COOL!!!!!!! And I dont understand what ppls problem with ooc is, I mean there are so many fics out there with ooc that its difficult to see any difference unless your very picky or havnt read any fics at all. I doubt anybody could get them to act perfect!
| Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 20:31 CDT
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YAY! Its an update its an update! I'm glad things have been explained. OMG Kagome's not really going back to Tokyo is she? Well, if she does soon, she wont have to deal with the three guys up there, Kouga Inuyasha, and now Hojo. If she leaves before Hojo does. Anyway, I hope to read a new chapter sooooooooon!!!!!!!
| Title: Its ok!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Helium is avalible to all! He can go between world, thats how he follows me!(^.^)"Yay" Anyway, another great chapter!!!!! Cant wait until the next one! And the name thing wasnt SO bad, just a small error that you made, no biggy. Will Inuyasha still be in a physical form when Kagura attacks?! I can't wait!!!!!!!
| Title: (^.^) HEEEEELIIIUMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:22 CST
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Wasn't Sango's last name Akutagawa in the begining? Thats the only thing I really saw other than some minor gramatical errors but we all have those! I just love this!!!! Its so good! Far better than the gohst storry I'm doing! So dont go feeling awful about such a great story becuase thats what it is! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Helium even likes it!!!! (Helium is my made up character.....Q(O^.^0)"HI") Yes Helium likes it! And helium doesnt like things that are so serious all the time. But he does!!!! And if Helium likes it, it must be good!!!
| Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 00:05 CST
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Another great chapter! I enjoyed it a lot. There was some nice insight to the past of some of the characters. I love how Inuyasha's moods can be so transparent (Like with the black smoke for bad ones). It's nice to see how Kagome is slowly soothing his soul. Personally, I don't think that you need to go back to correct or edit your previous chapters because I liked them just fine. (And I am a picky reader, haha) So yes, in this readers humble, or not so humble, opinion, you have done a fantastic job and I would rather see you continue on, adding amazing chapters to this epic journey of a story that you have addicted me to. But ya know-- it is your story, so I suppose that this is not my choice to make. Ah, just remembered something else that I wanted to say-- that fan part-- that was cute. There's a big fan like that in one of my gyms on campus and I bet from now on when I am running on the trainer I will think about that and giggle, haha. I cannot want to see some more Inuyasha and Kagome scenes! hehe. Hmm, how much longer till Inuyasha becomes solid again? If you cannot tell, I am still looking forward to that, hahaha. Well, once again, you've done a fantastic job and it was both entertaining and enjoyable. Keep up the great work! Your creative mind shines through the words of this story!! Hasta Luego! ---Aitu
| Title: Keep up the good work!
Reviewed By: Kiana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing fine! Keep writing, the old chapters don't need revision.
| Reviewed By: arrianna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that you should just write the next chapter. yiur story is fine, even with the small mistakes in it.
| Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouu-- Very interesting story! I just started reading it. And I do have to say-- I love it! It's so clever and fun. I love it when Inuyasha changes color-- and love it even more when he becomes solid, te he he. I cannot wait to see what else you have planned for us! Keep up the great work!!! --Aitu
| Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!
| Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 01:21 CST
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Wow, love the two POVS. I wonder who old grey eyes is and if IY will try to scare the pants off of Kagome, not literally mind you.
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