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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 09:07 PDT
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Heehee...Sms like a lot of people want you to make a sequel for this pretty little one-shot... ^..^ I have to agree with them...but frst, I need to see any other stories yu've written.. This is hilariouse, and an absolute fun read. I'm so tempted to say perfect, and it would deserve it too. Ja Ne, Zirra ^..^
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 00:13 PST
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NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! COntinue this please I like PWP and this story is very interesting and funny please continue, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!
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Title: FrEaKiSh
Reviewed By: FrEaKiSh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 21:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U, my friend, have gotten a legendary 10 rating from me. I NEVER give 10's...D'u mind if I steal the Sharingan being matrilinial thing? AND MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Icy Sapphire On: October 16, 2006 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know, this is the only way I will ever accept a m-preg fic. Mmmmm...Naruto nailing Sasuke...Sasuke nailing Naruto...detachable shower head...*nosebleeds* Damn, it's so much more fun when it's two men as women. ^___________^
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Reviewed By: Kuroneko Kurata On: July 31, 2006 03:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. This is incredible. The interaction betwee Sasuke and Naruto is not only well-written, but so believable! I can't believe that English is your second language, you write so well. This also inspired a lot of the NaruSasu in my own fic, She's a Rebel, for which I THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'd really like to see more fics in this universe. Maybe something about the two of them restarting the Uchiha clan? Your one-shots have a habit (coughcough Lace and Strawberries, which I LOVED) of turning into separate universes on their own, so maybe...? Thanks again for always being such and entertaining author!
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Title: SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BrokenSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 22:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U have to tell us how Sasuke nails Naruto...in ALL those plases he mentoned...GODS, just the image makes me...YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL!!!plz...
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Reviewed By: keyboardarcade On: May 21, 2006 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not big into Yaoi, but "not big", I mean I won't read it. I was skeptical going into this because I didn't know what to expect, but I have to say, this was amazing. Seriously, amazing. I loved the character interaction, and there was just enough of every element; storyline, humor, hentai. . .the right dose of everything good. I linked it to all my friends and posted the link in my livejournal, haha. Very Very good. I have to agree with everyone else who says they want a Sasuke nailing Naruto one. I can't say enough good things about it, haha
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Song-Lin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...God. This badly needs a sequel...or five. I laughed, I snorted, I got Coke up my nose, I practically orgasmed without the use of a hot male or female. Thank you for writing this. SO. MUCH.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: naomi-nicole On: February 20, 2006 12:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this fic and i think you should make a sequel or turn it into a long story. I want to read more about sasuke being the man and naruto being the woman. PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE!
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Reviewed By: me On: February 17, 2006 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should /definately/ turn this from a one-shot into all the times that Sasuke nails Naruto in payment. Naruto needs to suffer for scaring Sasuke like that. The poor boy thought he was pregnant. Also, awsome fic! I loved the part where Naruto thought that the drunk Sasuke was an illusion and decided to kick 'it', thinking it was a 'good idea'.
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Reviewed By: Shadowing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 19:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Unlike so many SasuNaru fics, this actually feels like it has a smooth transition point in their relationship, with a suitable trigger also. There are far too many that skip from where the series leaves off to the 'denial' stage. Doesn't stop me reading them (^_^), but it's nice to get that little hurdle dealt with properly instead of jumped. Very sensual, too. Good enough to keep me coming back, at the very least. Please, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Shadowing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 18:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Unlike so many SasuNaru fics, this actually feels like it has a smooth transition point in their relationship, with a suitable trigger also. There are far too many that skip from where the series leaves off to the 'denial' stage. Doesn't stop me reading them (^_^), but it's nice to get that little hurdle dealt with properly instead of jumped. Very sensual, too. Good enough to keep me coming back, at the very least. Please, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: bloozer On: February 10, 2006 02:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww man, i cant beleive you aren't updating this!
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Reviewed By: DBC13 On: January 06, 2006 15:18 PST
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I agree with Crave! I wanna know how Sasuke screws Naruto! pleez write a sequel about it pleez!!!
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Title: pleezz
Reviewed By: Crave On: January 03, 2006 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i've read it 4 times and still can't get evough if it please tell how Sauske screws Naryto pleeezzzz.
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