| "What Yuki Did" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: omg
Reviewed By: vampirgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg, i thought this was soo good. u must make anothr, i feel kinda bad 4 kyo now... but, i luv it!
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Reviewed By: Year Of The Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was a very cute story! Kinda sad though about Kyo, but besides that it was very cute.
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Reviewed By: Fuku Doll On: April 07, 2005 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww, this is so sweet. Yuki and Tohru really work well together, but I think Tohru was a bit OOC. (not really the horny, passionate type) I think it was a good thing though because it helps stretch out the story and such. ^__^ What really got to me was that mean, mean, mean thing you did to Kyo at the end! Absolutely lecherous! This calls for retribution (is that even the right word??) in the form of a sequel featuring Kyo getting some. ^____^ (Hehe, I am constantly churning out dirty thoughts...)
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:25 CST
Comment/Review:
oh pleeeeease make a sequal!! i was all happy but wene i read that kyo came in wene she said that it made me all sad and teary!! (but that means kyo is single!! *draws a pic of me and inserts it into the anime and makes him go out with me* YAY! im goin out with kyoooo im goin out with kyoo!) (hint hint nudge nudge: i love these kinda cliffhangers, but plz dont make it a cliff hanger and make a sequel ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kudari On: March 08, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am honored that you wrote more because I reviewed. I really like what you wrote and I am too wondering how Kyo reacted. hmm...
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Title: Brava
Reviewed By: Coop On: March 06, 2005 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to make a sequel to this one? I wonder what Kyo would do after he hears her say that. ~ponders this and starts talking incoherently~
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