Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Twas very interesting. Although I'd advise you this: next time you write a sexy sex scene, have barbie dolls with you. I have to read half of that scene twice and in some of the positions the characters where in, I don't think they would've been able to bend that way. Good job though!!
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