| "Fly Away Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 22, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! A party! yay! That would be funny to see Trieze jump out of the cake... 'Fei licking the frosting off.. *cough* back on track now. I can't wait to see what happens at the party! I bet it'll be exciting! Update soon! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 07:12 CST
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Ya more fic.I can't wait for you to continue.You ask for your readers advice so here it goes.I think that you should wrap the scene up with Duo walking away with blood on his knuckles or something like that.I don't think you need a big fight scence unless you like the idea best.I really want to get to Wufei and Trieze and see how things develope and how Trieze gets Wufei to accept his love.Love the part about the choker, bet Wufei will be surprised.More soon please.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 21, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Duo caught the jerk! You should just write out the last thing Duo does to him, like knock him out, threaten him, and walk away. I don't think you need to write a whole scene of him getting his butt kicked. (even though that'd be cool too!) Is Trieze going to get that for 'Fei?! He'd be so shocked! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! - Till Then, Auf Wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 19, 2005 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! some 13x5 action going on finally! I can't wait to see what Duo and Heero do next! Update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: SilverRayne On: March 17, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Keep the story going. I'm curious to know what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 17, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Some butt kicking! w00t! Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what else trieze does! Update soon! -Till Then! P.S. Happy Birthday!
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Title: ch.9
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 16, 2005 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, Mystery solved! I wonder what those two will do to poor 'Fei! I can't wait to see trieze over protected side for him (if there is going to be one, lol) Update soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 12:49 CST
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All this review and I'll write faster makes me feel like a hostage.But I'm a very happy hostage.I cant wait to read more about Wufei and his life growing up.Of course I'm looking forward to the little creep getting what he deserves.This story is getting more into the character of Wufei and makes you just want to read more.But if I were Wufei I might hide in my room for a few days it seems safer.
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Title: ch.8
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 15, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Poor Wufei! Will he get even more depressed once he sees Heero and Duo together? Or will Trieze magically show up? Also, Wufei is Chinese, so how would he know Japanese? Just wondering! Update soon! -Till Then!
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Title: ch.7
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi...still) On: March 15, 2005 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I'm really loving the fast updates! I wonder what Wu's ex is going to do, and what Trieze is going to do about it! And when will Trieze and Heero as Wufei and Duo out? Soon I hope! Update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 13:47 CST
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Hi again!Love this chapter oh the angst.Makes me wonder what Fei thinks of himself since he was with this creep.I read somewhere that he doesn't think he's that good looking but I wonder what other issues he's hiding.Treize can fix him up I'm sure.Keep it coming.Oh have a good time on your birthday and eat extra cake just for me yum cake.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 13:22 CST
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yeah, I wanna see him get what's coming to him. I liked how they all defended Wufei. It was cute. Love the speedy updates.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 13:17 CST
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Love it. Teach the bastard a lesson in the next chapter will you.
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Title: ch. 6
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 14, 2005 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! I wonder how trieze will react to Wufei's old boyfriend. I can't wait to find out! Update soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: live4you On: March 14, 2005 13:32 CST
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Hi all! Just thought I'd review since you seemed a little desperate for more input.I love the story so far.You've done an amazing job with Wufei.I love the part were he decided to give up on love thinking it just made you weak, so Wufei. I can't wait to see how Triez reacts to Wufei's old flame. Poor Wufei just when he stars having fun, ahh isn't how that always happens.Anyway keep up the good work there are other people reading and enjoying and I hope you write more Wufei stories there are so few good ones out there.
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