| "The Awakening of Radditz" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 12:10 CDT
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I just about glomphed my computer screen when I read the title and summary to this, and I'm even more happy after reading the first chapter. Raditz and Bardock are my two favorite Saiyans, and there need to be more fics about them! Please write more, I'm looking forward to it. Great job!
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate you and you're bloddy imagination.......you're so goo at what you do it wobbles the mind. Good fist chapter. I am looking foward to the next one.....oh and tell Bardock i said 'hi'.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 07:47 CDT
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*blinks* *eyes begin to well with tears* no new chapter? *sighs* This is my karma, I suppose, for all those times I fix typos in my stories and mm.org shoots off an update notice to my readers.... Ah well, I did read over parts of chapter one again. Love those rowdy Saiyans. My imagination is brewing. Is Celipa going to be rough with our Raddy?
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't leave me hanging like this! Update Pleaseeeeeeee! Don't make me beg!
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Reviewed By: TemptingTemptation [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 04:37 CST
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Wow, that was great! That was such a facinating glimpse into Saiyan culture. I always have such a problem visualizing their lifestyle, but you made it so clear and understandable. I thoroughly enjoyed how you portrayed their disinterest in their offspring while simultaneously describing the fight in the bar. You entertwined two aspects of their culture so well that you really get a feeling for them. I'm so impressed. Now bring on the sex!
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Reviewed By: Bloo... Gakuto*twitch* On: March 06, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't review this when I read it this morning. I Loved it simply put,as a whole, The way you characterize Celipa is great, especially the bar,scene with Toma and Bardock going on about that whore... a classic^^. I cannot wait for you to update this... I love it!!! I got my spork and I'm not afraid to use it.
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Reviewed By: christabeleve5761 On: March 05, 2005 20:33 CST
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spork spork spork more more more yummy fighting saiyans
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Title: AoR
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: March 05, 2005 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!! Of course, you already know how I feel about this fic. Great idea and your wonderful writing style is a plus. I think Celipa is in deep crappola. If Raddykins is anything like me the general idea is "touch my food and die". So now what? Is the woman gonna show Mr. Yum Yum what he can do with his "other tail"? ^_~ Will she ask him for a toothpick? Are they gonna fight it out? Will I have to wait years for an update? Inquiring minds wanna know :D.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 10:44 CST
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*sharpens sporks* You realize you've gone and done it now? You can't leave us hanging like this you now. *passes out sporks to reviewers* Spork at will!
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Reviewed By: Turleskoi....you know...sigh... On: March 04, 2005 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again…the lightly delicate, exuberantly fantastic play on words… Your writing is as indescribable as passion is in itself. We need more Raditz in fanfics. I can't wait to read more...
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Reviewed By: GutterBall (too lazy to sign in) On: March 03, 2005 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Barb, you're killing me. You set this aaaaall up, then leave us twisting in the wind? *dies* What can I say? I love the non-stop fighting in the bar, of course -- true battle-monger that I am. You gotta love the instincts that have you keep your beer outta harm's way just before a body comes crashing through. *nods* I've done that a couple of times myself. Never gets old. I plan to do my noble best to spork you into another chapter, but if Bardie only broke your shoulder with that pat, I guess I'm probably gonna need a bigger spork. *goes off to sort through possessions for some adamantium*
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 09:41 CST
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You posted it! You posted it! Oh Raddy so deserves this one. Celipa delight breezing over the water and all those muscled up men delighting in their own capacity for combat--it's all such a damn good look at Saiyans. I can be patient for updates if I have to be, but this world is just so fun I feel like I should have somewhere to just go and download the rest of the series, you know? So I could live in this world all day. You're a damn talented rat bag, you know. :-)
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Reviewed By: CarlaS. On: March 02, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say other than you are talented, brilliant, fantastic, incredible, worship worthy... And I hate you and your stupid talent >.<
Beautiful. And I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 19:24 CST
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Yea!!!! Another Bardockgurl story!!!! Did I mention that Raditz is my favorite Saiyan? No offense to Bardock but his oldest just has that nice long hair and that really sexy smirk. Yum. *El's mind wanders off* looking forward to more. *Evil Lisa grin* -El-
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:33 CST
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WOO! you knwo I am glad I am not the only one that sees a saiyan pub as a place with almost non-stop fighting. "You step over the poor f*cks passed out or knocked out by the door. It might be next week." I could see it, you write so well hun, you really do and don't blame it on Bardie for "patting" your shoulder XP Come vist me Bardock *Smirk* You can lay around with the clones. ^_^ *runs before she gets the crap beaten out of her* I love the story BTW. I hope it keeps flowing for you hun. I enjoy your writting alot. Radtiz as a wild man, yush! OK I am going to hush now... >.>
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