| "All Roads Lead to Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once upon a time, there was a beautiful princess named Cosmo. And Cosmo found an enchanting tale that she really really liked. It was called "All Roads Lead To Vegeta" by the court menstual person. (menstral? As in PMS? No. As in writes songs and stories and shit.) So anyway, the P.M.S. person (Named Tainted Fire) NEVER UPDATED THE FOURTH CHAPTER! And the beautiful princess Cosmo was left to pine away without her story, and wonder why she was named Cosmo, because it wasn't a very feminine name. Then a prince came, and his name was Julio, and Cosmo told him to fuck off, because they could never be together because he had a mexican name that was almost as bad as Jesus, or Whorehay. Cosmo didn't live happily ever after because one day she got high and drowned in the toilet. The end. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God Yamcha is such a fucken prick. I hope someone hence Vegeta blasts his fucken head off. I so hate him for doing that to Bulma. Or Bulma should learn some damn fighting skills and beat the shit out of him herself. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Lav On: June 30, 2002 22:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww... Poor Bulma. Write again soon. This one's good... ^-^. |
Reviewed By: Cosmo On: June 28, 2002 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I was reading this fic, and I was like, OH MY GOD! THIS IS SO SUCKY! I'll tell ya what your fic needs. It needs some Goku/Bulma action! WOOHOO! now THAT'S what I'm talking about! LOL, I'll talk to ya tomorrow chi, aren't I the best at leaving positive, moral boosting reviews? Oh! I get my comp back tomorrow! SCORE! alright...that's enough dribble in my review. |
Reviewed By: Stella On: June 28, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What an awesome fic! Can't wait to see more! |
Reviewed By: Pamneris On: June 28, 2002 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! I love your story! I also love world history and DBZ so this is awesome. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Lady Foeseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sugoi it's up!!! YAY!! Yet another great chapter!! Fun stuff! Thanks for fixing it. I nearly cried when it wasn't there. That's how much I was looking foward to it! Later! |
Reviewed By: Lady Foeseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 17:53 CDT
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YAY!! Good fic! But...um...where'd the second chapter go? I can't find it! Eh heh...Mybe it's me, but I hope to be able to read it soon! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All roads lead to Vegeta, ain't it true. I know all my roads lead to him. Keep up the good work, and write more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Tokumei Kibon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAGGA~ AMAMAMAAAAAZING!! I love it so! *gorgeous gorgeous fic* |
