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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you better keep writing!! *growls then laughs* like i said in my previous review and agreing with your A/N, dk, i plan to be here all the way. "I get kind of nervous around strange men." No kidding." I second that! He needs some serious social training here, and they do balance each other out. "Not bad. I like killing people,..." *laughs* man did he have to be so casual about?! maybe if he had put in 'bad' people then i wouldn't be a bit wary of him for Duo's sake. Now i'm really glad that the abuse they suffered hasn't so totally screwed them up that they couldn't imagine themselves being intimate with with each other but the real question comes is how will they react to each other in the bedroom when ya know... More please!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:27 CDT
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Ch2- It wasn't to graphic just enough to get the full picture, and ha, i'm writing something and it's not unbelievable to me. It happens. I'm so glad you continued, I want to see this thing through to when Duo isn't a victim anymore and doesn't have to worry about being targeted because he evetually learns how to handle these sex-*uckup-offenders, without umm killing them? and getting raped in the process and they end up behind bars! Malone, is a cool Dude, i'm so happy he decked his commanding officer, i would have been so royally pissed i would have tried to turn over a table after clobbering the guy and then adopted Duo and have him take self defense classes. On to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 10:56 CDT
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Hey D K!! I love your work! It is kinda hard finding an author that's good at writing funny and sad things at the same time. This story is GREAT and I'm glad Heero's finally in it. I can't really see him being a 'victim'. But I can see him killing the bastard that tried to make him one. Keep up the good work. oh, I love how you wrote the characters too. Go Molone!!! He's cool even if he is a po-po (police). ^_^ Looking forward to the next chap. ja matte ne.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey D K!!!! I love your work! Poor Duo-kun. Those people 'helping' Duo were assholes! How the hell could they be so calm?! O_O A friggin baseball bat is shove up his....and their act like its as natural as breathing! *takes claming breath* I like the story though.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOHHHH! You have to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Self defense isn't murder. At least in my book. Anyways keep going please. I'm sending more plot bunnies if you don't. I have a whole box of them and their mean.....and pink
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Reviewed By: Sandileina (Sandy for short) On: March 07, 2005 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that although this fanfic is kinda unoriginal, it's still very interesting. You do Duo's character really well! I love how you use 'ya' instead of 'you'... I really like it when people write Duo like that (using slang/spelling his words the way he'd say them)... I guess I'm kinda weird huh? ^_^;; Please bring out the next bit soon!! ~Sandy~ P.S. I don't know if you intend to use any Japanese in this fic, but if you want any help then I'm Japanese and I'd be very willing to help an author if it gets her to write faster! ^__^ My email addy is FudgyIllusen@hotmail.com so please do feel free to email me. ^_^ I'm willing to beta too...! *Hints like wildfire* Does wildfire hint? I don't know...
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 10:25 CST
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Can't wait to see what comes next.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 06:35 CST
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hmm... i'd like to see what happens next. And on your murder comment prehaps change it to death, for victims it's self defense but its murder when the victim's intent is to kill.. i think. i could debate the issuse but i'd feel kinda of silly. so update when you can.
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