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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 10:56 CDT
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Hey D K!! I love your work! It is kinda hard finding an author that's good at writing funny and sad things at the same time. This story is GREAT and I'm glad Heero's finally in it. I can't really see him being a 'victim'. But I can see him killing the bastard that tried to make him one. Keep up the good work. oh, I love how you wrote the characters too. Go Molone!!! He's cool even if he is a po-po (police). ^_^ Looking forward to the next chap. ja matte ne.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey D K!!!! I love your work! Poor Duo-kun. Those people 'helping' Duo were assholes! How the hell could they be so calm?! O_O A friggin baseball bat is shove up his....and their act like its as natural as breathing! *takes claming breath* I like the story though.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOHHHH! You have to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Self defense isn't murder. At least in my book. Anyways keep going please. I'm sending more plot bunnies if you don't. I have a whole box of them and their mean.....and pink
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Reviewed By: Sandileina (Sandy for short) On: March 07, 2005 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that although this fanfic is kinda unoriginal, it's still very interesting. You do Duo's character really well! I love how you use 'ya' instead of 'you'... I really like it when people write Duo like that (using slang/spelling his words the way he'd say them)... I guess I'm kinda weird huh? ^_^;; Please bring out the next bit soon!! ~Sandy~ P.S. I don't know if you intend to use any Japanese in this fic, but if you want any help then I'm Japanese and I'd be very willing to help an author if it gets her to write faster! ^__^ My email addy is FudgyIllusen@hotmail.com so please do feel free to email me. ^_^ I'm willing to beta too...! *Hints like wildfire* Does wildfire hint? I don't know...
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 10:25 CST
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Can't wait to see what comes next.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 06:35 CST
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hmm... i'd like to see what happens next. And on your murder comment prehaps change it to death, for victims it's self defense but its murder when the victim's intent is to kill.. i think. i could debate the issuse but i'd feel kinda of silly. so update when you can.
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