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"The Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
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 Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 12, 2005 07:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic is great. Your style and the attitudes you've given the characters are perfect. I was wondering if this fic would end up as a BV? Anyway, I really do hope you'll continue with this, I feel so sorry for Bulma feeling she has to live up to her parents' expectations and out match her sister. I think the lyrisc (evanescence?) at the end of chapter two fitted in well. Update soon.
 Reviewed By: dbzfanjess  On: March 11, 2005 12:58 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome update great chapter... I like this story its a nice little deep examination of bulma -Jess
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2005 07:00 CST
Comment/Review:
ah yes! A new chapter! *sniff* Sad. The descriptions here are very good. I look forward to more.
 Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2005 15:16 CST
Comment/Review:
dumb thing I had to sign in to post it... now that looks extremely weird... oy vey
 Reviewed By: dbz-fan-jess *not signed in* [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2005 15:15 CST
Comment/Review:
v. nice... I am glad your posting it and cannot wait for you to post more... I am not signed in... no surprise... but I am going to add you to my favs list..
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