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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 07:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic is great. Your style and the attitudes you've given the characters are perfect. I was wondering if this fic would end up as a BV? Anyway, I really do hope you'll continue with this, I feel so sorry for Bulma feeling she has to live up to her parents' expectations and out match her sister. I think the lyrisc (evanescence?) at the end of chapter two fitted in well. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 11, 2005 12:58 CST Comment/Review: awesome update great chapter... I like this story its a nice little deep examination of bulma -Jess
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 07:00 CST Comment/Review: ah yes! A new chapter! *sniff* Sad. The descriptions here are very good. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:16 CST Comment/Review: dumb thing I had to sign in to post it... now that looks extremely weird... oy vey
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan-jess *not signed in* [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:15 CST Comment/Review: v. nice... I am glad your posting it and cannot wait for you to post more... I am not signed in... no surprise... but I am going to add you to my favs list..
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