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Reviewed By: me On: September 11, 2005 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm… I've read this story on Fanfictoin.net now, and it had the Ryou and Bakura parts in it. In this fic it doesn't. Did you forget it?… I think you might change that error, cus its very confusing… Anyways I still liked this chapter. I hope you get well soon! ^__^
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Title: COOKIES!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nekosune On: September 10, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm... I really loved it! Cookies for you! Pocky for Yumi! And... erm... I don't really get the little narator bits but *shrugs* Oh well... Loved it! Update soon for Yamyams!
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: September 03, 2005 05:08 CDT
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so cool! yami and yugi are getting along, and bakura and ryou, malik and marik too!! *squees like the fangirl she is* that is so cool! I also like the way you made them met and stuff! keep up the good work! *smiles* and please write another chapter very soon!!
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Reviewed By: me On: September 01, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I was actually very curious what happened to Ryou and Bakura, instead what happened to Malik... Oh well I like the story so far... Update soon! ^__^ (and please tell me what happened to Ryou and Bakura *Chibi eyes*)
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Title: SEX
Reviewed By: YAMI LOVER On: July 23, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have question: WHEN IN THE FUCKING HELL RYOU & BAKURA IS GOING TO HAVE A SEX SCENE IN THIS STORY?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhh! I'm finaly glad to get that done.^_^ One more thing I'm a girl and I'm YAMI LOVER!!!
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Reviewed By: Nubian Jewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 17:51 CDT
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That was great. Very original writiing. I can't wait to you get back and complete the story. Oh and I vote for story E, if that's the one about Yugi and his memories.
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl(notlogedin) On: July 06, 2005 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww its getting better cant wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: June 15, 2005 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is realy good. I sorta couldn't understand it at fist, but now that iv read a little more, this is a realy good story.(kinda hard to fallow because it jumps around a lot) But after you think about it, it gets very interesting. Please write the next chapter soon. I'll be weiting. ^_^
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 20:18 CDT
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I love this story it's awesome! Bakura has to get a tutor!!! Ha ha! Who will the first to fall? I like the way you portray Yumi she's a cool character. I know what the preps and jocks are like. I'm not a punk really cause my parents would freak, but anyway... sorry I started to ramble. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: med On: May 09, 2005 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a lovely and creative story i wish ot see more of your work in the future. It should be excellent once u finish! keep it up! :)
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Title: I.stab.rabbits
Reviewed By: kitsunetears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 16:09 CDT
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uh...it's hard to type with a broken finger (now i can't flick people off) very clever. dude i luv the fic. make the chappies a wee bit longer and add more details and it will be all good. i like the story suggestion about the hikari's parents 'cuz all the fics that i have read like that sucked my non existant ballz so if you could make a good story about that i would be most appreciative. i like jelly beanz ^_________^
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Title: writing at school, hey, I'm at school now!
Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: April 28, 2005 02:07 CDT
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I understand your predicament, don't worry, short chapters can be good too, and yes, I will continue reviewing this, it's nice to find a new chapter in my inbox as well. So it's finally getting together a bit ne? with Ryou having to tutor Bakura (can't wait) good luck to you!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 16:39 CDT
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A new and unique way to approach writing fics, I like it. Very enjoyable and I am glad that I stopped to read it. One piece of advice I would offer, (because it is something I do all the time) make sure you finish your thoughts when you write a sentence. I don't remember where they were exactly, but there were a couple of spots where you start to say something but don't finish your thought. Great story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please write more soon! And I can totally emphasize with your predicament, having something almost exactly the same problem to deal with. -_-'''' Love!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: April 26, 2005 14:51 CDT
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school computers...what hell, I know your problem. *mumbling* and a sarcastic friend telling you you're ygo obsessed aint' helping eitherm, ow well, about your story. I didn't think it was screwed up, it makes a nice chapter in-between if you get my point. keep going!
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Title: d
Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story so far!! this is really gotting good!! i cant wait to see the reat sooo..hurry up!!!!!!!^-^
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