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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 10:15 CST
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Great update. I wonder what Yumi is going to do. She still has friends in America but she has new friends in Japan too. Her boyfriend (ex) is a real jerk. I hope she can make the right choice
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this story. Sorry I can't help with the names, I don't know any either. Please update soon.
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Title: nubian_jewel
Reviewed By: Nuby On: September 26, 2005 13:06 CDT
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Yay! you updated. Please continue this is great and can we see some more Yami/Yugi action. I have a few critiques (is that spelled right? My spelling is horrible.) Um, sometimes in the story you mention this that never happened or you didn't put in there such as Seth badmouthing Yumi, you never wrote that in the story or Yugi going to play card with Yami and Mrs. Moto, you also never wrote that before, so just be careful with that, also I liked to make a request. Could you perhaps make the chapters longer? I would be greatly appericated. The story is great I just wish there was more to read. Other then that and a few grammer errors you are doing wonderfully and I can' t wait to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 17:37 CDT
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*blinks* I don't know if you've realized it, but chapter 16 is the exact same as chapter 17. It even says in chapter 17 that it's chapter 16...Just thought you'd like to know if you didn't already. Any way, I did like your story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I know you must have a busy life and all, but I really would like it if you could make your chapters a little longer. I hope you write more soon and I'll most likely reveiw the next chapter too unless my compy decides to die. Then I can't really do much of anything. Well, until then.
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Reviewed By: P.Suru00 On: September 25, 2005 01:34 CDT
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poor you with the bad day*sigh*. it happens you gotta write more soon i'm dyin here major shounen-ai is needed
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything is coming together. Yami is being nicer to Yumi and the guys are getting along. I hope they get together soon. I hope Yumi finds someone. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 (not logged in) On: September 22, 2005 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO YUMI!! Poor Kura!! He fell first! But that also means...RxB FLUFF FIRST! YAY! Awesome story!! Update soon!!
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Title: XP
Reviewed By: Priestess_Suru_00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 09:04 CDT
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dude this is my crack xp i totally lurve this story you must write more before i go rabid or something. oh and yumi's a total badass luv her. i want to see some real yaoi damnit
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34(not logged in) On: September 18, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY! Ugh Seth is a B#($@#$&*@(# *breaths* ok I'm better now ^_^ But great job!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 01:02 CDT
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I really like this fic. I just caught up on reading it. Great job. I think Yumi should stay in Japan.
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Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: September 16, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeay!! You wrote more chapters! Im so glad. Sorry i havent ben reviewing, my internet desided to sell. Enyway, I hope you write more! the story is getting so interesting! Well I will be counting the seconds untill the next chapter comes! See you then! ^_^
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Reviewed By: me On: September 11, 2005 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm… I've read this story on Fanfictoin.net now, and it had the Ryou and Bakura parts in it. In this fic it doesn't. Did you forget it?… I think you might change that error, cus its very confusing… Anyways I still liked this chapter. I hope you get well soon! ^__^
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Title: COOKIES!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nekosune On: September 10, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm... I really loved it! Cookies for you! Pocky for Yumi! And... erm... I don't really get the little narator bits but *shrugs* Oh well... Loved it! Update soon for Yamyams!
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: September 03, 2005 05:08 CDT
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so cool! yami and yugi are getting along, and bakura and ryou, malik and marik too!! *squees like the fangirl she is* that is so cool! I also like the way you made them met and stuff! keep up the good work! *smiles* and please write another chapter very soon!!
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