| "A Hellish Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU UPDATED!! KEEP THE GOOD STUFF COMING!
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:58 CST
Comment/Review:
YaY! you updated! ok, now im totally curious to see Vegeta's reaction when he sees how strong Goku really is...i wonder if he'll be mad...
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 04:31 CST
Comment/Review:
aw! what a horrible place to end!! Well...its currently 2.30am, so i guess, in a way, its good that it ended or else id be up even later... you HAVE to update!! SOON!! i wanna see where all this is going!
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you have to update this fic SOON! I've dismissed this fic a few times as just another completely plotless G/V lemon (sorry!), but now that I've actualy read it, I want more! I love Goku's innocent and childlike behaviour in this, and also how Vegeta's protectiveness of Goku developed quickley but believably. I've never read a fic where Goku is NAPPA'S slave!! That's why I've given you a 10 for originality. I hope you update this soon, and I really think you should get more reviews for this- It's great!
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