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Title: chapter 15
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 16:57 CDT
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LoL. The whole Vegeta not understanding the concept of tickling was too cute.
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Title: chapter 14
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 17:11 CDT
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O_O so wait. Nayo is Zarbon's SON?? Good Lord I didn't see that one coming! And what happened to Gohan while Goku, Raddiz, and Zarbon were talking? Was he jest standing there listening??
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Title: Reyn's review for Ch. 13
Reviewed By: -_- [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:28 CDT
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ok, for some reason mediminer is being stoopid and despite me logging in, my name won't show up when i try to review. Anyways, I like long chapters ^_^ and great job with how Goku and Vegeta handled the whole situation when learning Gohan was alive and well. I'm assuming he's being rasied by Piccalo? Although, I don't know how that would come to be...I guess I'll wait for your explanation ^_^
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Title: chapter 12
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 23:00 CDT
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o_O a Sayin child?? Where'd he come from?? (anxiously awaits next chapter)
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:04 CDT
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wah! you have ch 11 down twice under ch 12!
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 23:44 CDT
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oooooohhhh! ok, now that makes sense. Hooray! Goku brought some peace of mind to Vegeta. YaY! Vegeta's impatience had me laughing. I was waiting for him to snap "I'm a Sayin, dammit! I can take a little pain you overgrown baka!" Now that I think about it, I've never come across a DBZ fic that involves a masochist Sayin, which I find rather odd, all things considered.
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 21:29 CDT
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aw. that was short. and I feel out of the loop considering the two saiyns went from jest kissing to 'mating' unless kissing is what zarbon meant....oh well.
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 17:35 CDT
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poor Vegeta. He's got all these skeletons in his closet that he needs to overcome in order to be peacefully with Goku. And Goku's strength really isn't helping him find much peace of mind...
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 17:29 CDT
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bum bum bummmmmmmm. And that's all i can really say to that ^_^
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:46 CDT
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wah! this chapter is so sad! i was rather amused by the kiss and how it seemed to take place in front of so many people, and no one really reacted or said anything. (especially since it was Vegeta involved in the kiss) keep up the good work! ^_^
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:50 CST
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YaY! another update! you've got me totally worried about Naya or whatever the slaves name is. I hope he's alright. I'm surprised Vegeta isn't ticked off about Goku being so strong. Well...more glad than surprised...
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU UPDATED!! KEEP THE GOOD STUFF COMING!
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:58 CST
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YaY! you updated! ok, now im totally curious to see Vegeta's reaction when he sees how strong Goku really is...i wonder if he'll be mad...
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 04:31 CST
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aw! what a horrible place to end!! Well...its currently 2.30am, so i guess, in a way, its good that it ended or else id be up even later... you HAVE to update!! SOON!! i wanna see where all this is going!
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you have to update this fic SOON! I've dismissed this fic a few times as just another completely plotless G/V lemon (sorry!), but now that I've actualy read it, I want more! I love Goku's innocent and childlike behaviour in this, and also how Vegeta's protectiveness of Goku developed quickley but believably. I've never read a fic where Goku is NAPPA'S slave!! That's why I've given you a 10 for originality. I hope you update this soon, and I really think you should get more reviews for this- It's great!
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