| "Mine Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_Warrior_Miko12 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic i really do. but inuyasha is a wimp! i understand he dosent want kagome to go but he dosent have to be so needy about it. i had to keep looking at who was doing all that to make sure it wasnt shippoh! no offence. oh and you need to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: thyme cat On: May 16, 2005 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kept me interested; I look forward to reading more. Looks like the demon is going to win since Inuyasha is being kind of a wimp, but that is the way things go when you're being angst-y, right? I like the way Kagome reacts to him though, good job. (Oh, and the formatting suggestion from twin_star_of_suzaku was a good one. It will be easier to follow with paragraphs.)
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Dchan3 On: March 31, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the concept of this story and I'll say it's about damn time Inu's demon made him claim Kagome! I hope that he'll come out and tell her why he's acting so strangely. I think his demon side should eventually be nicer to her and try not to scare her so much. But this is a great idea that you have and I hope you'll continue to write and update soon.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: March 19, 2005 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww... so sad wel keep up the good work and update when you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: twin_star_of_suzaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 23:58 CST
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*eye twitches* You've made Inu-yasha into a wimp!! geebus, even Shippou could whip him in this state of mind! i'm sorry hun, i hate giving harsh reviews but you obviously don't know boys or the character very well.... Another complaint i have is simply put: FORMATTING! It's all just a big glop of words only slightly double spaced. Learn to indent on new paragraphs as well as formatting on quotes.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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this is good, I enjoyed it muchly. I love Inuyasha/Kagome fics, specially when there is a demon Inuyasha. There were a few grammatical errors and run on sentences, but a wonderful read. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 On: March 12, 2005 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bounces up and down* Update! Please! im going to die from suspense...x.x;; your an amazing writer and dont ever stop writing..please update soon! E-mail me when you do..:Kagome0820@aol.com -Kagome0820
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Are you planning to update soon? You'd better, or you're dead meat by my hands! Lady Hikage of the Northwestern Lands
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Reviewed By: GekkoTenshi19 On: March 11, 2005 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! You had me captured from the first line to the last. I can't wait to see what happens. I really REALLY wanna know. please update soon!!!!
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Title: HEY!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you just can't leave it off like that your evil so you better update again soon pleasE? i'll give you a COOKIE!!!!
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Title: Awsome!!
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 16:56 CST
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o.0 have i read this before on fanfiction.net? i could have sworn that that was in 3 difrent chapters. anyway i love your fic please continue ^_^
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:02 CST
Comment/Review:
OOOOHHHHHHH THE SUSPENSE!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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