| "Confessions of a Broken Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: dancergrlyyhluvr On: February 16, 2006 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story and I would totally love it if you could continue it. So would my friends, but they're too lazy to review.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story here. Ok, next question...when ya gonna update? Keep up the good work.
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Title: Woops!
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blushis* ooops...sorry about that. I probibly should have read more than the first 2 chps before blurting out in a reveiw like that. The storys just kinda started out simaler. But still, awsome story ^_^ My apologys once again.
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Title: Wonder full story
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW YOU!!! *jumps up and down* You're Myralee_8 from animespiral.com, this story is called "A Broken Heart, New beginings" there!!!! It's me ITO, the author of "Shattered Innocence" frrom that site!! Wow, you have more chps posted here!!! *adds this story and author to faveorites* ^_^you would be on my faviortes at AS(animespiral) too, had they not deleted all of them. I can't figure out how to post a chp here. I Hope that you update soon. I love this story!!!! Ja ne!!
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Title: inu-kag15
Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 09:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is awesome!!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow abosulutly outstanding work. you have completely made me see Kikyo in another way. she was my most hated character b4 i read this but your writing told me that she is not evil just misunderstood. i truly believe that if this situation really happened in the series she would behave just like this. although kagome and inuyasha are still my favourite couple i fell like i understand kikyo a lot more so thank you. you have portrayed her wonderfully. keep up the great work and update soon!!
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Title: Wow! Intense...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story a while ago...and I'm ashamed to say I didn't review. I thought I did, *hangs head in shame* and even tagged it. -- What an emotional story you have woven. Very well written, easy to read, the flow from chapter to chapter is clean and comprehensible and the characters are "in" character. I love how you have portrayed Kikyou, she is a complex character and NOT evil. Naraku is as dispicable as ever, kudos! What a horrible thing to happen to Kagome, but she is learning a lot about herself and dealing with her fears. You are doing an amazing job and I can only wait with anticipation for the next chapter. Very, very well done! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: MaiBlossom On: March 18, 2005 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice FF. I wolud be really greatful when I coukd read the next Chapters. So... please write the next one...
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Title: eoverlord@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Evil Overlord On: March 12, 2005 05:17 CST
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whoa. I *love* this story, it's very well done. My guess is you've done at least *some* research as you haven't made Kagome "all better" after her experience. Everything to date has been well-written, and I've been pretty much hanging on every word....I can't WAIT to see the rest!!
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Reviewed By: ashi On: March 12, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is the best fanfic I have ever read if it doesn't continue from chapter 10 I am like gonna die of sadness and curiousity mixed!!! I swear I was literally crying when I read this, tears of joy and sadness. If you got this fanfiction published in a book or as a series I swear I would buy every copy!! you truly have talent when it comes to writing, so I please request that you continue this fanfic =^_^= well, thank you!! btw, no fanfic will EVER be as good as this...and I mean that!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-gi-oh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! This is really depressing. This is a really good story. It makes me sad, but I cant wait to read more
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Reviewed By: jacketslacker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! That about sums up how dark the story is. I hope for the sake of the readers you bring this to a close where all parties end up happier. Not to mention a very slow and horrible death to the rapist in the hands of Inuyasha.
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