| "Teen Titans: Slade's Return" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: WTF
Reviewed By: stitches11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, just one little thing. Chapter 5. 'Have your way with her'. Ummmm. yeah no fence but what was that all abt, you just had to incorporate it into the story. Even though it didn't happen the thought of red-x 'violating' starfire has probably scared me. But other than than that good job :)
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Relyt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty sweet keep it up buddy you rock
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Title: ...........
Reviewed By: malchior [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good piece of work, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: StormySkye013 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
'sup. I really liked your fic, the writiing style was great. I'm eager to read more, please continue! Stupid Slade... oh hey, what did he mean by 'whoever completes this mission first will be leader of this team' (or whatever, it was something like that) Did he mean like second in command? Or would he be taking orders from them? ('k, I don't really need an answer. But I try to give advice on how to improve, it pisses me off when no one will give me any helpful questions/criticism. Sorry it that wasn't helpful.) Okay, I think that's it. Toodles! Keep at the good work! Love, Skye.
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