| "To Sleep with a Traitor" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Whit On: June 01, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please update! i'm really interested of what you'll come up with next
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Title: PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS ONE OF TEH BEST STORIES I HAVE READ IN A LONG WHILE!!!!! I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE DUO AND HEERO IN THE BEDROOM.!!!!! ( I CAN'T HELP IT!! I HAVE A HENTAI MIND!!)
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 09:11 CST
Comment/Review:
You have got to Update! Will Duo actually betray Heero? That would be soooooo interesting to see how they'll end up together. Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Hadassa & Arashi On: March 19, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just browsing mediaminer when I came across your fic. I LOVE IT!! You should definately update soon. I thought it was one that had been updated, but I found out it was all new. Very original idea! I'm going to have to go and read some of your other stuff as well. But keep up the good work!! ~Arashi
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: March 15, 2005 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo0o0o new story, I like it. I though maybe you updated one of your other stories but than I saw you made another one instead... I like though, I think this plot is great, and now you've got me hooked. Please update soon. Oh will you be updating your other stories sometime in the near future? Anyways, I will be waiting. JA Ne!! Fujinakaheero ^.^ Oh P.S The whole perfect 10 i did was because you deserved it and it's the truth. No sugar coatings, ^.-
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Reviewed By: hllcat805 On: March 14, 2005 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great. Good beginning but i think you got the age pattern a litte messed up. . This is interesting, i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 13, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a good beginning, so please keep going. Update soon! I like it so far.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 15:23 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very interesting. I like your use of imagery. There are just some grammar errors that you should perhaps work on, such as splitting sentences up that have more than one complete thought. Also, I noticed that after it was "seven years later," Duo had only aged five years. He went from being 14 to being 19, instead of 21. I look forward to seeing more of this story soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Backward [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Gah! You cannot leave it there!!!!!!! Please please PLEASE write more soon!! Its wonderful and I want to know whats going to happen!
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