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| "A Yugioh Trip to the Farm?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: bk agen BiOtCheZ
Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 16:17 CDT
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K pplz sorrie for the long w8 but juss came bk from Calli. (i wasn't planing 2 go there in the first place) Sooooo ill get rite on da pic alrite!!! Cheerz B-gurl
| Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 09:47 CDT
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Ness, did I tell you that my old account was frozen? Well if i didn't...it's Lily Fairy here ^.~ Glad you agree to the lemon! And maybe the whole gang goes to do something, like...i dunno, brand the cows(that's gotta hurt...)? and then a couple slacks off, starts 'talking' then decides to take it to the bed room...then when the gang comes back, they watch a movie or whatever, and another couple goes off to the bedroom....maybe you could make a chappie per couple? Just an idea...I'll be waiting for the chapter...
| Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, you do like to cuss but at least the chapter was funny! please hurry up and update!
| Reviewed By: AmaneBakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 12:20 CDT
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you got my yami wrong, Touzoku-ou isn't her name, that is bakuras real name, my yamis name is Morgan.
| Title: ok
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u need help,ok then...hmm...well,maybe have shane talk to whoever he's looking for *forgot* and with serenity,he listens to her side of the story (not seren) and learns the truth. in anger,shane dumps seren and makes her suffer a mental break down and he says he's sorry to ishizu,knowing ishizu is forgiving..serenity want to get back at shane so she tells joey to duel him. the two duel and it becomes a really close game, but shane manages to win using his dark magician of chaos. shane then talks to ishizu again and they get caught up of their feelings and thats where the legal S-E-X comes in...when everyone is out of course....except marik,he is protective of his sis,as he finds out whats happening,he challenges shane ot a shadow game, if he loses,shane cant see ishizu ever again,the duel begins and is even more intense thnbefore,and ishizu gets very worried. insert cliffhanger there. remember,u dont need to be explict,some clues and all are good enough,but its up to you ^^ maybe chabe it to R unless u go REALLY explict with the lemons.. Shane.
| Title: A lemon? Sure!
Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 18:35 CDT
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Hey u guys it's Ness here! A lemon sounds gr8! I'll du it, but ill have to change da rating to N-17 i fink! (yeay!) and it will b mawh first lemon so go e-z on meh okay! _B_GuRL_!_ (p.s. Shane, ur gunnah have 2 help meh on dis ^_^ and who eveah wants 2 help 2. it mite take a lil while)
| Title: *sly look on*
Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 11:34 CDT
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Ness, I think what Shane said was a good idea....you could make some of the fic lemon! Well, not if you want to of course, just an idea. ^.~
| Title: *grins*
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 19:29 CDT
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so you know, Isis is 20 YRS and shane is 19 Shane+Isis= legal S-E-X *grins* you dont need to make a lemon if u dun wanna, but there is the option of leaving clues of whats going on and all. Shane.
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i also forgot to mention, My OC REALLY REALLY REALLLLY despises those who act like serenity (AKA backstabbing people), so, IF shane finds out....well...lets say seren might have a mental breakdown and all, and Isis will be with shane again ^^. hmm.....wonder if his magician deck can beat the king of games...and the oh so famous tombrobber....and the billionaire C.E.O.......
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, awesome chapter!! i loved it when Yami tried to chop bakura's hand's off! *rofl* anyways, yea...i both like serenity and Isis....but im leaning towards Isis more seeing as she shares a bit of my persona and is around my same age....plus she "has crushed on him since last year." lol. pleas, keep up the awsome work and update whenever! Shane.
| Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:13 CDT
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this chappie was awesome! tea CURSES!!! *gasp* and I have a weeping willow in my back yard...and it's not exactly the prettiest tree ever....oh well. lol. and plz, NEVER make me say the word 'friendship' again...PLZ!!!! and ness....dont make me giggle....plz!!! *gives u puppy eye look* and bakura screaming his head off was hilarious and no horses are not my life's ambition. i just like them! ^.~ YOU MUST UPDATE SOON GIRL! ooo sidenote: i'm starting to like valon better...so i might show favoritism to him more often than to seto
| Title: EWWEE
Reviewed By: BakuraReMixTer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 11:47 CDT
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*skips in* heya all! glad u lyked mawh chapter. i made 1 HUGE error i wanted share wit u all. first of all, when Abtina said- "I hope you know that me and Riz aren't girls" it should b are instead of arn't. Yeay! LUIV U ALL and next ficie isher comin soon! B-gurl
| Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHOO! YOU GOT IT GOING ON! PLEASE CONTINUE!! YOU CAN'T GIVE UP YET! GO! GO! GO! UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(It's me Riz) Nice! YOU'RE BACK!! I THOUGHT I'M GONNA GO NUTTS THAT YOU LEFT! Anyways here's a poem of you coming back: Since you're back, I want to say welcome back, I thought you left the sack but you came back and thank goodness you were not attack. When I read your chapter, I went knick-knack. But if you leave again, I'm gonna go rick-rack!~~An that's all, if you don't like the poem I made then forget it. Anyways, please update soon!
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic so far, very good ^^ anyways, heres the info if your still taking OC's: Name: Shane Tasaka Age:19 Gender: Male Personality: nice,caring,helpful, protective of his friends and loved ones... Looks: Amber eyes, silver hair thats down to his mid back,tan skin, muscular build, but not too muscular. Crush: Serenity and Ishizu (uh, you pick one ^^;; ) Clothing: black sleevless shirts and demin jeans. Powers/millennium item: no milenium items. Any other Info I need to know: has a powerful magician deck that has 3 dark magicians, a dark magician of chaos and dark magician girl, plus numerous if not limitless ways to bring out his magicians.
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