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"Moments We'd Rather Forget..." Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
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 Title: WacDonalds: Serves 1 billion a year
Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamned [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You stole my idea of WacDonalds! I hate you, and I'm going to go cry into my pillow. Nice job, by the way! :)
 Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamned [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You stole my idea of WacDonalds! I hate you, and I'm going to go cry into my pillow. Nice job, by the way! :)
 Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2005 01:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'd like to say that all your stories were funny with a twist. It's like you can guess where it's taking you but the way it happens is unique. I'm sorry to not have found this sooner. It's getting hard to find quaility works such as this. And I suppose to feel in the blank for Kagura she could be a horse trainer. I mean what better way for her to feel free? The wind in her hair open spaces. I suppose a race car driver is not a place I'd picture her but if you can make it work for you feel free to use it. I hope to read more soon.
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2005 18:29 CDT
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I actually found that funning. Poor Naraku. Yay right!! Hmm, something Kagura wounld do. How about ice stater. Or something of traditional dancing. When she hides behing her fan, it opens the mind to the possiblity of professional dance. Maybe an instructor of dance, of all sorts, the tango, or more traditional Japanesse dance. Hope that helps.
 Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2005 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL Im hoping that im not a pervert and that Naraku really DID have a..thing up his ass....well u kno..a "thing" up his ass EEEW lol he's stupid, love the story, really funny haha please update soon
 Reviewed By: Kurayami Dokumori [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that these are getting very interesting to read, and that after reading about the third one I thought of Inu-Yasha ending up mkaking out with a guy... it just seemed to fit his character no? lol, great job, never read anything like it :) Hope you keep going! ~Yami~
 Reviewed By: Stolen Death [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know about Kagura but.....I've NEVER had a sexy teacher... O^-~O Still love it. ^_^
 Reviewed By: Stolen Death [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
o_o...........I'm reading chapter 4......It would be a lot funnier if it hadn't happened to me. Once again, great chapter.
 Reviewed By: Stolen Death [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This rocks. The first one made me laugh, and so did the second and third one. XD I haven't gotten past any more yet. Embarrassing moment? Well, there was one time I was playing MASH with a bunch of friends. (A game where you give one person 7 names and places) Basically, you pick 4 numbers, and the end result is, The place, position (quickie counts as one), time, and person you have sex with.....I'm a female, so I had to pick guys that I KNEW. Sadly, one of them was there....And you can guess I was embarassed. Nothing happened, but I gues you could run with it and do something. Heh, heh.....I love suggestions that suck by the way. Great stories. Love 'em.
 Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2005 10:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow that was the laugh i needed today thank you! ^___^ i was almost in tears but the last chapter you posted it just reminded me that there were not cute teachers at my school! ^___^ lmao well keep up the good work !
 Reviewed By: gunslinger_inu (lazy, wont login))  On: March 21, 2005 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
keep writing these are great........
 Reviewed By: reader1  On: March 17, 2005 09:43 CST
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oh my gosh! i think i would've died!
 Reviewed By: Sara S.  On: March 16, 2005 22:22 CST
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Loved the stories. They were all cute:) Can't wait to read more.
 Title: yep!
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2005 16:52 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Oh yeah, those are definatly "Moments we'd rather forget" tee-hee! good job cant wait to see what you have next!
 Title: Meow?
Reviewed By: Thorns [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2005 14:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh god these are so funny! Really good, really funny. I still can't stop laughing... >.o; Cant wait for the next one! Cheers.
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