| "Together Again" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: What tha f**k
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: April 12, 2005 15:00 CDT
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Hey what tha %#^%&*&*%%$^ is your ^*^(^*(% problem PLEAZE continue the ^&%&*%* story before I &(*&(** cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon i want to know what happens!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 07:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oy! You must get around to the update-osity! Grrr.....*stops as rae glares at her* umm....yeah...this was very good, stop looking at me like that! I'm goingto update soon!......maybe
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 02:44 CDT
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Hey this is a great story keep up the good work and I hope you update soon cause i wanna see if inuyasha remembers Kagome. Probably not huh but I wanna see what his reaction is. PLEASE AND THANK YOU!!!! *~Inuluvher151~*
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: bobness27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! this is a beautiful story! and i do have to say, that i will be using the line " What in the name of Kami's over sized knickers" for a long time now..lol. keep updating! i love the story and will keep reading it!!
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Reviewed By: dario'sgrl On: April 10, 2005 21:02 CDT
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kill the cliffies now!!! kill it now....... i need more story dont leave me like this..... now i g2g cause my boyfriend is home.... kill the cliffie
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Title: =^_^=
Reviewed By: 1katie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 14:42 CDT
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DIE CLIFFIES!!!! DIE I TELL YOU!! **throws tomatoe** lol... another great chapter from a great author:)
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool glad to have a new chap. ^_^ update whenever you can.
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Title: ^o^
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was awsome. lol "...chuck stuff at her..." nicely done. lol i am almost afraid to say more, but next chap soon ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol great new chap. and a saprise ending. lol more soon please. ^_^ (good work!)
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Title: good format
Reviewed By: slim393 On: March 24, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your format alot. However your fanfic lacked discription of the surroundings. When Inuyasha was in his room your really didn't tell what it looked like only that it was messy. I like the concept but you should also put how the characters feel from time to time. This is only constructive criticism you can choose to use or not,but you have an interesting idea and you should really run with it. Its pretty good for your first, mine was awful. From one writer to another you have talent....I hope you take my advice good and luck on your fanfic. P.S I know Reviews are relly important than people think so i hope you continue and i look foward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start, but it needs to be longer chapters. other then that, it is a damn good story. please update soon ^_^.
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Title: goddess 5634
Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVE this fic..though the chapters could be longer..but any who love the fic..plz update SOOOOOOOON...cant wait..later days!!
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Reviewed By: 1katie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!! please continue quickly!!! it's already on my favorites list, and it inspired me to write one like it... but i think i'm going to keep them little for a few chapters, and somebody's out to get kagome, but is this ok with you? i hope so! i love you're writing! good job!
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Anyways, I like this a lot (but you know that sinse I read it, edited it, etc) but for all to know THIS FIC RULES!!!
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