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Reviewed By: RandS On: June 10, 2010 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Overall, not bad. I like the idea of Kaiba on the bottom, teehee. You slipped in some random "Joey"s in the 6th chapter which was distracting, and the switching back and forth between them using each other's given and family names felt a bit unnatural. Sure, they're having a lot of sex, but I think they would stick to the name they're familiar with (in this case, they'd use each others' family names, since I don't think they've established their relationship to be emotionally/psychologically intimate enough to be using given names yet).
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Title: U83R 1337 H4X0R
Reviewed By: U83R 1337 H4X0R [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree totally w/ Sweetdeily. awsome fanfic!!! unfortunatly one of the hottest scenes was slightly bumpy due to a few grammer mistakes that made me reread parts for full understanding. i also love how u made one fanfic and had it branch into a few seprate storylines, maby make 1 that brings them all back together? ;) ;) *nudge* *nudge*?
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 05:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to let you know I am an extremely harsh reviewer, and I don't usually give people a rating unless I -can- give them ten out of ten. But FUCK. I mean seriously... FUCK. that has to be one of the single -most- erotic things I have read in a very long time. I've read over some of your other works and... O. M. G. is all I can say. You think the character's had mind-blanks? I was staring at my screen blankly for an hour while I read this, fingers just desperately clicking the next button when I was forced to move on. Your writing is fucking erotic. Is... is... I mean, shit, you're as good as Crimson Drake or Purple Mist- and I don't hand that compliment out to just anyone. This story is going straight on my favourites and so is your username. Your way with scenes and words is just... is just... incredible- I barely have words to describe it. You work the characters masterfully, and the story just... the story just ROLLS itself together into this erotic little... story. And it's fucking hot! >/So much for not being into guys,/ he thought, >and waved that part of his self-image goodbye. Best line in the whole thing. I burst out laughing! You wonderfully balance out the humor and the smut and the serious, so that we have seriously funny smut! And it works amazingly! This is a rare talent that is just -imposible- to find. Also, the Seto-uke... well damn. I've only ever read two stories that had decent Seto-uke's. This is the second one. Well done!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladyfox20 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 13:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
are you ever going to update this story? I'm getting old here. I want to see how it ends but how can I if you never contiune? I am a calm person but get slitly annoyed when a story is not finished. sorry if I sound mean but come on, it's a good story.
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Title: *_*
Reviewed By: Sisco [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*suddenly recalls the masturbation song from Green Day* Yeah! Not going there. Oo; Eeeeee! Yes, I'm insane...and in need of dire help. Actually, I don't think any psychirochist(sp?) could help me.
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too busy to log in) On: April 06, 2005 08:39 CDT
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That was great. I loved the down time and I checked the site. I think I will be going there quiet often to learn more. Not that I need to, but it is good to get others opinions, I know a lot of gay guys.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:41 CDT
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OMG, I think I just died and went to yaoi heaven! That was just so awsome, great sex scenes! Hot, hot,hot... Damn, we need more! They need to explore this new side of themselves, especially Jou! Now, you'll have to excuse me as I go hunt for a mop and dry rag so I can clean the computer and floor of my drool. Update soon, ok? Please?
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute! I like it!
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Title: Is It Hot In Here??
Reviewed By: whosjeebus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect Score!! Holy CRAP!! To use the author's very own words, that was spine-meltingly hot... I'll just warn all of you right now, chapters 5 and 6 are gonna require a drool guard, trust me on that. I'm such a diehard Jou-is-uke-and-only-EVER-uke type person, that I'm surprised at how much I enjoyed the recent updates. That's how well written this fic is, folks. Now, I'm not gonna go crazy and say that seme Jou my new favorite thing, but this was written in such a plausible, sensible, intriguing and appealing way, that I couldn't resist it. Can't wait to see where you're going with this next. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:20 CST
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Hot as alway, I totally can't wait to see what happens next chapter...as if i couldn't guess. hmmm I look foward to the aftermath too, can't wait to see whether Setos walls go up again and the CEO runs scared or whether he accepts it. Anyway love it!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 24, 2005 11:29 CST
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Oh My God. That was hot. Can`t wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Coolness...so...get to them finally doing it! WHEEEE! I love this story, you're such a good writer!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in) On: March 23, 2005 14:55 CST
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HEY! How dare you cut off in the middle of sex! I was really enjoying things too... Now you gotta update soon, ok? I really want to know what Kaiba's going to do to Jou!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 10:14 CST
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Omg thank you so much for emailing me about this!! I love it you wonderful amazing great person...I'll email you back right now!! Velvetina xx
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 17, 2005 12:55 CST
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That was great. I can`t wait for the rest.
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