Title: LaLa13
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, while this is a great poem, and I like the way you wrote, I am a Christian and a little disturbed by the way you wrote about God. It might seem sometimes like God doesn't care for the pain that we go through, but he does. When we go through trials, we only learn to love him more and become stronger. One more thing, God doesn't makethings happen, he letsthem happen. And he has a plan. All things work together for the good of those who love God. -LaLa13
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