| "How Do I Tell Him?" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ridertz On: January 10, 2004 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything was good, except "I" thought Tai was a too weak which didn't make his character fit too well. From the original, Tai was leader and should be a bit more "manly", but I enjoyed the story overall, good job!
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Reviewed By: Sillie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great!! I just loooove Yamachi's! Tai's to cute for words... ^___^ Love this story!!
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Reviewed By: Mitoshi On: July 17, 2003 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it! |
Reviewed By: neaphara On: February 23, 2003 12:24 CST
Comment/Review:
i spent half a night to read the whole story! wow, that was something!!! |
Reviewed By: Yagamigirl On: February 04, 2003 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!*has sparkling eyes* That was greeeat!^___^*yay* I enjoyed to read this fanfiction really much!*smile* Couln'd stopt reading(stupid school) and wanted to give you a li'l review for this marvelous story, it was so fun!^^
Especially the end was very cool*giggles*
If I wouldn't hated Sora so much, I would pity her!*eg* But she deserves it, I think. In the chpater, which Yama were taken to jail sometimes I alsomst cried... duh.*sighs* This... bit**!*groans* Uhm, okay, no bad words for a good fic!^^; I *love* this story, you should write more!^_^ |
Reviewed By: mae On: November 23, 2002 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i just had to leave a comment to say Dir en grey rocks! lol I also really enjoyed your story! sora is an evil bitch. tai x yama forever! |
Reviewed By: reedoo On: October 08, 2002 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. Suprisingly enough I'm finding it hard to find good long Taito/Yamachi fics nowa days. And this is great :p loved it, keep writing. |
Reviewed By: denny On: May 09, 2002 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hate sora ao it is great.But it didnt say if snake got out. |
Reviewed By: k@ri2cute On: January 07, 2002 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i totally loved it !! but i really didnt like how they made tai all weak like but thats ok !!! |
Reviewed By: Calumon On: January 02, 2002 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. The only real thing I found wrong was some of the spelling :) |
Reviewed By: Erica On: December 15, 2001 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! i'm totally hooked on this! i've just GOTTA know what that skank-bi!tch Sora's up to next! please continue this! pleez pleez pleez pleez! hehe :D |
Reviewed By: anime_luver On: December 14, 2001 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic was great so it was supposed to be an 8 but i liked it so i rated it a nine! keep writing more! you rock! taito/yamachi is great! |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 On: December 13, 2001 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know ive reviewed before but i am going to say this .i order u to get the next chapter up soon :)this is a good story .write write write write write i think i gave you the hint . |
Reviewed By: Sailor_Chibi On: December 13, 2001 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate you! You can't just leave people hanging! What crap is Sora spreading around? Please, I just gotta know! And I do love it! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 On: December 01, 2001 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far and u should keep writing . u have talent. i hope to see chapter 14 soon . |
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