| "Soul Devotion" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: CaribMiko03 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 10:16 CST
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I really like your story. Its so hard to find good stories nowadays but this one is real good so far. Keep up the good work and update as soon as u can!
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Reviewed By: Sambosaurus On: March 24, 2005 20:55 CST
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Quite Exceptional might i say ^.^ keep writing... im excited to read more of this story...
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Reviewed By: Devil's Dance On: March 22, 2005 03:36 CST
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It's good so far. I think you need to either proof read or get a beta reader. You made quite a couple of mistakes in the words that you use.
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: March 20, 2005 01:21 CST
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So far this story sounds interesting. I'd like to see how it turns out. Waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: emie
Reviewed By: wacami_emie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! it sounds great!! Update!
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 11:52 CST
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Hmmm...this story could be really good. I can't wait to see what you write next. Oh by the way, you got your math problem wrong. You wrote "3y(4x - 3) equals 12yx - 9", but it should be 12yx - 9y. Just thought you might want to fix that if you ever revise your chapters later on!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!! its a great story ^_^
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