| "The Untold Terror Of The Betas Three" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: im the loniliest beta in cell #2
Reviewed By: basement-inhabitant007 On: March 19, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i miss being next to my fellow member of SASS ... i will not cry damn it! lol ... seriously this was so hilarious and made my day so much better after last night lol .... i couldn't stop laughing .... hehehe at least we have our cells next to each other ... poor kim her safety circle can't help her now .... and i don't even want to know what type of cell Diana is going to have to have bc she would help us try to escape lol or gnaw through the bars herself lol ... she's so feisty .... hehehehe this is truly great lol hopefully it won't make greta cry lol hehehe
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Reviewed By: Rini (not signed in) On: March 19, 2005 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
You've cracked, you have finally cracked.. XD lmao
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Title: Evaaaaal!
Reviewed By: your first victim-15 On: March 19, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nothing like writing yourself as the most evil author on the planet...LOLOL Though seeing myself as a main character was quite...strange. LMAO. What a nice stress relief that must have been for you! I LOVED it! Seriously couldn't stop laughing the whole way through. Granted...alot of them are inside jokes but hilarious just the same! Thank you for taking the time to do this. I am sure it will come as something we will reread just to get a laugh. I loved the part when you separated 'SASS' cause you thought they were plotting against you. The ending was hilarious! You are truely the master!
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Reviewed By: Suze (and I need to sign in why?) On: March 19, 2005 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't....breathe....laughing....too....hard..... Poor, poor hentai betas. They just didn't know what they were getting themselves into, did they? LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: KaloBagh@mediaminer.org On: March 19, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious. You're an awsome writer. Can't wait till your next story. Love and Peace Ani
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