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| "Hearts of Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Duece of Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 20:57 CST
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Oh My God. After sitting at my PC for three days straight, that's all I have to say. I can't rate your fic, for the numbers that I would use are higher than the 10 that is offered here.
This was jaw droppingly beautiful. I really felt Akane and Ranma's pain for each other as they were seperated, and I really appreciated the many sublties that you used during the writing of this fic. Your characterization is awesome, and this plot is aboslutely wonderful. I could go on and on and on and on about all the things I liked about it, but I'd run out of space before I finished.
I think Cologne is wonderful, and I really sympathize with Yuki-onna. I found myself sympathizing, then pitying, then praying for her as she went through her own internal struggles concerning Akane, Ranma, and her own Shin. I never hated her. Even when she was trying to kill Ranma, I couldn't bring myself to hate her.
I also had to sit back, and imagine the beauty and mystery of the Kami-plane that your words wove inside my head. I felt as if I were actually traveling along with Akane as she left the domain of Yuki-onna, and as she travled into the demon lands.
Oh my, I've probably said too much as it is.....But I do hope you continue!
-Duecy | Reviewed By: Adyen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah... I love your work, and I wouldn't dream of forgoing the pleasure it will be to read the finished chapter 24...
btw, how long ARE you going to take on that? | Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2002 17:36 CST
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WOOHOO!!! I LOVE THIS THING, Mam'sell Perry, but I shan't harass you about the next chapter; I'm sure you've got enough people doing that as is... | Reviewed By: Louise McCrowe On: November 12, 2001 06:20 CST
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Interesting... does uploading your fic to media miner mean we can finally expect a chapter 24? :)
-mccrowe | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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