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Reviewed By: garfield08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 23:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
so cool and hot at the same time! nice fanfic! better than mine! hahaha teker!
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Reviewed By: sakura_yuki23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
iT's GooD BuT TrY to aDD moRe RomAnTiC ScEnEs...iF iT sTiLL DoesN'T enD TheRe..
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Reviewed By: emzi_32 On: April 08, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not really fond of uber-mushy stuff.. it made me go crazy.. but u'll do fine
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Title: dOnt mind andrey_4414
Reviewed By: recee lee On: April 02, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NiCe!!!
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Title: is this story end ????
Reviewed By: Kryuzei (kyuubi9) On: March 29, 2005 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(well, i just hate login...) is this story end here ????? well anyways, the story is "quiet" good....
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Reviewed By: andrey_4414 On: March 29, 2005 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sowee! i submitted da wrong rating b4... (^-^)
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Reviewed By: andrey_4414 On: March 29, 2005 01:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! ur fanfic is great! how can submit my fanfic?
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Title: Hehehe...
Reviewed By: Jecky On: March 28, 2005 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish you add some attitude and some...you know, rated scenes. It gives me the chill...and I like it! Hope you add it...more romance too.
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Title: Kawaii desu-yo!
Reviewed By: Jecky On: March 28, 2005 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honto ni kawaii fanfic! I like it...hope you can add more romantic scenes in it...no problem with the grammar or whatsoever...
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: March 24, 2005 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing and unique! please continue!
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Title: KEWL!!!!
Reviewed By: AoiFurin (too lazy to log-in) On: March 24, 2005 10:31 CST
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WAAHH!!!! Go Kanata...kick some Seya butt!!! err...ehem(cough) This fic is so cool! I like how you portrayed Kanata and I'm really looking forward on how the story will develop! keep it up!!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: March 22, 2005 03:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Niiiiiiceeeeeeeeeeeee! First chapter rocks!
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Title: Just going to point out..
Reviewed By: Chiaki Nakamura On: March 21, 2005 02:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Kanata tore his face away from the questioning eyes of one of Miy's bestfriends, purposefully to hide his blush. This didn't go unnoticed by Nanami. She just smiled. Just to point out something... I think that the word you're looking for is not "purposefully," but "purposely." I, of course, may be wrong, but... er... yeah. I'm a bad critic, ne?
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Title: Fwoinally! A S-M-K fic!
Reviewed By: Chiaki Nakamura On: March 21, 2005 01:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice, AU is always good, especially when the characters are stll their normal selves. Kanata is quite ooc, though. I think it looks better if he was ALWAYS in denial, but then, we won't get anywhere with that kind of fic, right|? Anyway, uh, yeah. I like the kiss thingy part. Please update, unless this is a one-shot! -What Will Be Your Faithful Reviewer, Chiaki Nakamura (cherz)
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Title: HOT
Reviewed By: ragnarok_totg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 16:35 CST
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that was HOT!!! I see that this is an AU D!3 fic where kanata is more in touch with his true feelings. Seiya seems to play a major role in this one. And Miyu is still Miyu. Look forward how it would progress I Love the K&M momments though
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