Reviewed By: trapt_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was well-done and quite enjoyable. Althought it was basically PWP, I still could help but think that Daisuke was a little OOC...I could imagine Dark coming on so strong, but Daisuke was never really very...seme in my mind. But aside from that, everything else was very well-done (well it's PWP..the only thing left is the sex...). And one last thing: Went daisuke kissed Hiwatari that first time, did you mean to put the word 'killed' or 'kissed'? I figured you meant the latter.
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