| "Second Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 On: June 28, 2002 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to read the rest of this.
Post more soon. |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: June 22, 2002 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Y'know, I've been avoiding reading this story for some time, but now that I finally have, I have to ask myself, "AM I ON CRACK????"
Because this story is good. No, not just good. DAMN good. It's original. It's well-written. It's pure genius. You da man.
Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Achilles, The Guy With a Bad Ankle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. Very nice. Unfortunately, I've only read the prologue, and 1st chapter. I'll read the rest later. But so far, you've done a great job. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! I am glad you finally updated. I can't wait to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: sley On: April 21, 2002 08:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey,
i really can say that i love this chapters... your story is getting better and better..*smile*
please write more.. and as soon as you can...
bye
sley |
Reviewed By: Jay On: March 25, 2002 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original idea. I can't wait to see what Goku..er..Kakarrot has in store for the "Prince". ^_^ |
Reviewed By: TX2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
it takes more than a banana to take down Goku...
it takes a BLACK banana
I hope the end's concept is more ridiculas (like goku coming back when an anvil hits him on the head) |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 23, 2002 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Classic banana slip, I love it. I have never seen this done before. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Sley [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
hey..
it took you really long for this chapter..*nods*but i have to admit.. i like it very much... and maybe my idea is also right.. with goku... that his.. "good" side.. is somehow dead... really the idea would also be great that this side of him continues to exist.. but is oppressed by this one...
but well... maybe i like goku too much.. so i don't want him to suffer...*smile*
but you already know what i think of your story(I like it!!!!!!)so... continue...please... and pleasse,please... a bit faster??!! if it is possible..
sley |
Reviewed By: Evil Child On: August 29, 2001 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!! That was really really really good (the ending was funny ^.^) but it was WAY too short! WRITE MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: FireDragon On: August 30, 2001 01:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL! I think this is going to be good!! More!!! |
Reviewed By: Kia On: August 30, 2001 02:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm... This has potential. |
Reviewed By: sley On: September 01, 2001 03:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...come on write more...i want to read what happens next!!And i want to "see" Kakarott...o man-how will vegeta react?? |
Reviewed By: Graves On: September 01, 2001 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Not only is it well written, but the plot is one I've never seen before. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Nekoni On: September 02, 2001 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying the story so far, you have a great writing style although it can be confusing at times. Keep it up! I hope to see more chapters soon! |
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