| "Ougon Hoshi High" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 22:28 CDT
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Umm...the first part of the chapter is in there twice..... otherwise, it was funny. Though, what does Kagome want to talk about? Stupid cliffhanger....Maybe about inuyasha's habit of putting his hand up her skirt? Update soon
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Reviewed By: Morbid Angel On: August 02, 2005 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
other than the fact that you coppied the story stice that was perfact. And does this "talk" mean that kagome's hussy actions are comming to an end? up date soon.
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Reviewed By: InuKagLover714 On: July 26, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! I've read both of your inu/kag fics and i love them to pieces!! I can't wair for you to continue!! Write soon!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetnothinangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is awesome, I can't wait to see what happens next. You are a great writer, keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: GWPH On: July 15, 2005 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is great can't wait to see what happens next. I'm a real kikyou hater i think thats enough to summon up what i want to happen to her. UPdate soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Later ~GWPH~
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Title: ello!!!
Reviewed By: scryazngirl On: July 14, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good storyline, its not ur typical high school story, also thnk u for fixin da problem (mixin da chaps) caus wen i was readin it nd came to one i got so confused -_-' neway keep up da good work!!!!!
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Title: I came to see it on this site for the lemon
Reviewed By: Egyptian Kiss (not logged in) On: July 13, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an excellent chapter. It wouldn't let me review on the other site and seeing as the lemon was on this one I decided to leave a review here, as opposed to fanfiction.net. Anyways. Great chapter. I truly hoped the lemon would go further, but that was excellent all the same. I hope you update soon. I can tell this story is going to be absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work and update soon. I might mention you on my story. Update soon. EK!
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Reviewed By: guylover8392 On: July 13, 2005 12:48 CDT
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Yea im totally lost now. First there on a pool table now there mad at each other. THen in the second to last chapter Kikyos there and inuysha says he still wants her? pls pls pls email me on whatis going on here. I do like your storys alot they have just got massively confusing my email is. lilmunchkinchika@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 22:45 CDT
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luv ur story so please update asap please!!!=)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover07 On: July 12, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~Chapter 14~ Dinner with the Family It is a trotally different story. It is like 3 stories in one. where is 3rd one from? They are all very interesting, but please separate them and give us the names of the stories. I would love to read all of them.
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Title: ummmmmm? WTF?
Reviewed By: Hanyouluverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...this was getting to be a really good story, but I don't get the tranisision from high school, where all the charcters were modern, to the feudal era like the TV show and manga takes place. I was on chapter 8, and at the end of that chapter, they were on the pool table...Then...Chapter 9 [pool tables are fun but they lead to trouble] was all about kagom being in Heat in the FEUDAL ERA! What th heck is going on? i don't know if you just made a mistake or something, but your story was getting really really good until you switched everything up and didn't explain anything!!! It kinda sucks....please email me to tell me if I missed something at iggy_krash@hotmail.com. Please email me soon so I can continue reading your great story.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:51 CDT
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What fanfic are those chaptert from?
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:16 CDT
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You have posted the chapters from the different story.
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 11:30 CDT
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You posted the wrong chapter... . your chapters are posted under different names then the titles.. and They seem VERY familiar. Like I'v read them before. that also dont follow the current story line. Startign at Chapter 8
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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: June 30, 2005 15:40 CDT
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This is pretty good so far, and don't end it to soon. Maybe have a chapter where kik tries to kill Kagome but is expled and sent to prison. You are one of those writers who I don't need to tell not to screw up and give them threats since you have a thing with this story!.......
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