| "Ougon Hoshi High" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: ello!!!
Reviewed By: scryazngirl On: July 14, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good storyline, its not ur typical high school story, also thnk u for fixin da problem (mixin da chaps) caus wen i was readin it nd came to one i got so confused -_-' neway keep up da good work!!!!!
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Title: I came to see it on this site for the lemon
Reviewed By: Egyptian Kiss (not logged in) On: July 13, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an excellent chapter. It wouldn't let me review on the other site and seeing as the lemon was on this one I decided to leave a review here, as opposed to fanfiction.net. Anyways. Great chapter. I truly hoped the lemon would go further, but that was excellent all the same. I hope you update soon. I can tell this story is going to be absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work and update soon. I might mention you on my story. Update soon. EK!
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Reviewed By: guylover8392 On: July 13, 2005 12:48 CDT
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Yea im totally lost now. First there on a pool table now there mad at each other. THen in the second to last chapter Kikyos there and inuysha says he still wants her? pls pls pls email me on whatis going on here. I do like your storys alot they have just got massively confusing my email is. lilmunchkinchika@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 22:45 CDT
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luv ur story so please update asap please!!!=)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover07 On: July 12, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~Chapter 14~ Dinner with the Family It is a trotally different story. It is like 3 stories in one. where is 3rd one from? They are all very interesting, but please separate them and give us the names of the stories. I would love to read all of them.
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Title: ummmmmm? WTF?
Reviewed By: Hanyouluverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...this was getting to be a really good story, but I don't get the tranisision from high school, where all the charcters were modern, to the feudal era like the TV show and manga takes place. I was on chapter 8, and at the end of that chapter, they were on the pool table...Then...Chapter 9 [pool tables are fun but they lead to trouble] was all about kagom being in Heat in the FEUDAL ERA! What th heck is going on? i don't know if you just made a mistake or something, but your story was getting really really good until you switched everything up and didn't explain anything!!! It kinda sucks....please email me to tell me if I missed something at iggy_krash@hotmail.com. Please email me soon so I can continue reading your great story.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
What fanfic are those chaptert from?
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have posted the chapters from the different story.
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 11:30 CDT
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You posted the wrong chapter... . your chapters are posted under different names then the titles.. and They seem VERY familiar. Like I'v read them before. that also dont follow the current story line. Startign at Chapter 8
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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: June 30, 2005 15:40 CDT
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This is pretty good so far, and don't end it to soon. Maybe have a chapter where kik tries to kill Kagome but is expled and sent to prison. You are one of those writers who I don't need to tell not to screw up and give them threats since you have a thing with this story!.......
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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: June 30, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good so far, and don't end it to soon. Maybe have a chapter where kik tries to kill Kagome but is expled and sent to prison. You are one of those writers who I don't need to tell not to screw up and give them threats since you have a thing with this story!.......
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Reviewed By: SlightlyPyschoPrincess On: June 24, 2005 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Every single word!! It's wonderful!! I can't get enough!! I havent' found a lot of fics that i like that have inu and kag going to the same school but this one is terrific!! I can't wait for yout next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM35 On: June 09, 2005 06:44 CDT
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OMG!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I hate cliffies...^_^
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far! I look forward to more updates!
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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 10:24 CDT
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I like your story so far. I hope u update soon> This isn't going to be like the series where Kagome mopes over Inuyasha is it? Not that there's a problem if it is. I personally just think that it makes her look pathetic. Great story so far!
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