| "Dreaming of a Rainy Day" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mistress of Shadows On: June 13, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure know how to make a cliffie Update soon! I love riza's alchemist's name
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Title: LFMAFG!
Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: June 13, 2005 14:14 CDT
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(Loyal Full Metal Alchemist Fan Girl!) I'M ONE OF THE RABID FAN GIRLS!!! -a large crowd of rabid fan girls behind me- I'M THE LEADER!!!! Now, if you don't update again really soon, I'll release the fan girls on Ed and Al! DON'T MAKE ME DO THAT......UPDATE! -all the girls behind me- UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(me being lazy) On: June 10, 2005 23:14 CDT
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awsome chapter..lol i love your authors notes. so funny..update asap, please, till then, ja ne, Zirra
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: me lazy On: June 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
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hmm, good chapter, and i love riza's alchemist name. it fits her perfectly. update asap pleas, till then. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 03:52 CDT
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*Lip quivers.* Why?! Why must you make me suffer with your goody-ness and you cliffhangy-ness?! I forgot to take my medicine because of you?!......just kidding. I don't take medicine. Anyway. Love the chapter oh so much! Alert! Alert! Akira: In the process of making a fanfic about FMA with me in it!!!!(Guess who I'm with, tee hee!)* Does a little weird dance.* Doin' the Happy dance! Get ya groove on!AHHHHHH-subject change- love ya fanfic and for your freggin info I'M NOT CRAZY!!!!.....just been up for 2 days in a row going on cherry coolade and sugar cubes--------:) Smiley----------
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Title: LFG!! (loyal fan girl)
Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: June 05, 2005 21:22 CDT
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HI! SOOOOOOOOOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! THANKYOU SO MUCH! -hugglz- I Hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 20:44 CDT
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great chappy, update asap,please. till then, Zirra
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Title: Yay 4 me!
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the freakin BOMB man!!!!I'm serious! You are like the best F.M.A. Writer ever!!!But that lil Beotch Whats-Her-Face Clara needs to step off cuz shes calling Edward cute names and if anybodies gonna do that.....It's gonna be me! And Riza you my gurl!!! I would've shot him in both feet but i guess the hand is good to. Where the heck is Al by the way. He might get a lil somethin-somethin ciz my cousin goes crazy for a guy in armor. And NO i don'tmean in THAT way you sicko! Oh yeah! I almost forgot! Poem for Edward! I wish I could kiss you tender lips, Or atleast touch them with my finger tips, I love you more every single day, I thank the lord that you aren't gay, Would you catch me if i fell?, Is this love? It's hard to tell?. YAY FOR ME!!!!! I hope you all know this is really hard to say. DON'T SCREW WITH MY FEELINGS!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 21:51 CDT
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yay...lovely chapter...i just love Clara...such a character...would love to know the history with Ed...Chibi-san *giggles are heard*...love it...update asap PLEASE...I BEG OF YOU!!!!!...well till then, Zirra
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Title: *Sob sob*
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:19 CDT
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*Whines* Why do you torture me so?! GOD!!!! Right when something important happens you just have to freggin end the chapter. POO ON YOUR HEAD!!!!Oh yea! I cant belive you actually deticated that chap to me! You an sooooo flippin awesome! Well if you dont mind id like you to tell Ed something 4 me. (To Ed: I love you! And for everyones info, your not small. Short, but not small...and besides, I think short guys are hot. Yay!) Update or im gonna cry and think who will look bad? Not me thats who.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 19:55 CDT
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oooh, want more fluff please...no where are you?, drat she already left...oh well, i'll just have to wait.*sits down on your doorstep waiting for you to update...it starts to rain* crud*sits in the rain* oh well.......well you can either update or watch me sit in the rain some more(i sure hope you update because rain is wet*shakes some water off, remaining soaked anyways* stupid rain wettness. please update asap ps i love the necklace idea. well bye, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: May 01, 2005 14:18 CDT
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GAH!!! NOT GONNA UPDATE FER A WHILE?!?! DAMN!!!! >W< Grrrrrr...I liked the chapter, BUT UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Mistress of Shadows On: May 01, 2005 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update soon! I can't wait anylonger for it!
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Reviewed By: Abyss+ On: May 01, 2005 00:20 CDT
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It is great one of the best so far in fan fic keep writing plz i read everyone i do think it needs a little bit more romance though what is up with the talking in the begining and how can i do that.
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Reviewed By: Abyss+ On: May 01, 2005 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great one of the best so far in fan fic keep writing plz i read everyone i do think it needs a little bit more romance though what is up with the talking in the begining and how can i do that.
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