| "Dreaming of a Rainy Day" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: me lazy On: June 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
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hmm, good chapter, and i love riza's alchemist name. it fits her perfectly. update asap pleas, till then. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 03:52 CDT
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*Lip quivers.* Why?! Why must you make me suffer with your goody-ness and you cliffhangy-ness?! I forgot to take my medicine because of you?!......just kidding. I don't take medicine. Anyway. Love the chapter oh so much! Alert! Alert! Akira: In the process of making a fanfic about FMA with me in it!!!!(Guess who I'm with, tee hee!)* Does a little weird dance.* Doin' the Happy dance! Get ya groove on!AHHHHHH-subject change- love ya fanfic and for your freggin info I'M NOT CRAZY!!!!.....just been up for 2 days in a row going on cherry coolade and sugar cubes--------:) Smiley----------
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Title: LFG!! (loyal fan girl)
Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: June 05, 2005 21:22 CDT
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HI! SOOOOOOOOOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! THANKYOU SO MUCH! -hugglz- I Hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 20:44 CDT
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great chappy, update asap,please. till then, Zirra
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Title: Yay 4 me!
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the freakin BOMB man!!!!I'm serious! You are like the best F.M.A. Writer ever!!!But that lil Beotch Whats-Her-Face Clara needs to step off cuz shes calling Edward cute names and if anybodies gonna do that.....It's gonna be me! And Riza you my gurl!!! I would've shot him in both feet but i guess the hand is good to. Where the heck is Al by the way. He might get a lil somethin-somethin ciz my cousin goes crazy for a guy in armor. And NO i don'tmean in THAT way you sicko! Oh yeah! I almost forgot! Poem for Edward! I wish I could kiss you tender lips, Or atleast touch them with my finger tips, I love you more every single day, I thank the lord that you aren't gay, Would you catch me if i fell?, Is this love? It's hard to tell?. YAY FOR ME!!!!! I hope you all know this is really hard to say. DON'T SCREW WITH MY FEELINGS!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 21:51 CDT
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yay...lovely chapter...i just love Clara...such a character...would love to know the history with Ed...Chibi-san *giggles are heard*...love it...update asap PLEASE...I BEG OF YOU!!!!!...well till then, Zirra
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Title: *Sob sob*
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:19 CDT
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*Whines* Why do you torture me so?! GOD!!!! Right when something important happens you just have to freggin end the chapter. POO ON YOUR HEAD!!!!Oh yea! I cant belive you actually deticated that chap to me! You an sooooo flippin awesome! Well if you dont mind id like you to tell Ed something 4 me. (To Ed: I love you! And for everyones info, your not small. Short, but not small...and besides, I think short guys are hot. Yay!) Update or im gonna cry and think who will look bad? Not me thats who.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 19:55 CDT
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oooh, want more fluff please...no where are you?, drat she already left...oh well, i'll just have to wait.*sits down on your doorstep waiting for you to update...it starts to rain* crud*sits in the rain* oh well.......well you can either update or watch me sit in the rain some more(i sure hope you update because rain is wet*shakes some water off, remaining soaked anyways* stupid rain wettness. please update asap ps i love the necklace idea. well bye, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: May 01, 2005 14:18 CDT
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GAH!!! NOT GONNA UPDATE FER A WHILE?!?! DAMN!!!! >W< Grrrrrr...I liked the chapter, BUT UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Mistress of Shadows On: May 01, 2005 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update soon! I can't wait anylonger for it!
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Reviewed By: Abyss+ On: May 01, 2005 00:20 CDT
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It is great one of the best so far in fan fic keep writing plz i read everyone i do think it needs a little bit more romance though what is up with the talking in the begining and how can i do that.
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Reviewed By: Abyss+ On: May 01, 2005 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great one of the best so far in fan fic keep writing plz i read everyone i do think it needs a little bit more romance though what is up with the talking in the begining and how can i do that.
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Title: Dreaming of a Rainy Day
Reviewed By: Nee-chanFaye On: April 30, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell why don't you update your leaving us all hanging you do relize that!
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Title: ONE MORE
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im gonna review one more time just incase you dont get enough encoragment to write more cuz if encoragment doesnt work threatening is good to so you need to update or ill come down there and make you write!
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Title: .............
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh yeah...im just gonna give you another review cuz i love fullmetal alchemist and i also love edward cuz he is so hot and NO ONE CAN MAKE ME CHANGE MY FREGGIN MIND!!!!!!.......sorry 4 the out burst....
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