| "Dreaming of a Rainy Day" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 14:51 CDT
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hey.....i'm not here to act like a mentally obsessed idiot like I always do cuz i just wanted to tell you I wont be reviewing for a long time. When I was about to go on the bus tour in my city, i was with my dog. That same bus hit Pudding right in front of me so you probably don't now how hard this is. sorry....
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Reviewed By: Yuriku On: July 25, 2005 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's a nice fanfic. You had some grammar and spelling errors that made some parts confusing and all, however I really did enjoy reading this. It's pretty creative too, The whole Roy/ Ross fluffiness..I don't belive I've ever seen anyone else think of that. Your style is good, but read over it really well. I barely understood the battle scene. Regardless, you must continue...If you don't I shall hunt you down and sick my rabid lamps(random item!) on you! MWAHAHAHAHA! *clears throat* eh heh heh eh...* turns quickly* Anyways, buh bye!
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 01:28 CDT
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oh ok I get it! He doesn't care that I broke up with him AND called him short! Hes too good to mention to me huh!? Hes ignoring me cuz I'm with Inuyasha now, Is that it!? WEll I thought we could still be friends but I guess thats not possible! But its ok.....hes half the man Inuyasha is(Literally)I don't care. Does it sound like I care? Well does it!.....I didn't think so..... Oh yeah ,Riza, I really feel sorry for you cuz Water Goddess put you with that Jack Ass but, hey, whatever you want. And I got a Question that finally has to do with the fan fic and NOT Edward. What was up with all the waiting like when Maria came in and she was all like 'Hey Riza and Whats-his-face(Yeah, he dropped to the rank of whats-his-face)arm out there doing stuff' and Roy and Havoc were all like'..........(5 min.)WHAT?!' Whats up with that. Is that sarcasum or is that wat really happened? I don't know. Oh yeah Why does your muse like chocolate so much? And since it does here you go*Gives huge buckets of chocolate fudge.*This should keep it out of your hair for a while........END TRASMISSION........
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:31 CDT
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Ok I know I have been the best DRD(Dreaming of a Rainy Day( Fan but its just because my computer crashed. And if any other fanfic calls, don't belive anything it says cause i have been faithful through and through. I know we have are arguements but went i said "I do." I really meant I!*Pretends to cry.* And you know I would do anything for you. And if you ever leave I swear I will track you down*Mood quickly changes*OK! Now what was I gonna say?...Oh yeah. I Don't like ed anymore cause hes mean and stupid and...SHORT! Yeah I said it...short. Hes just a shorty short pants with his legs and short arms and his short......well i really don't know if THAT is short but you know what I mean. I guess what I'm trying to say is IM PISSED!!!!!.....only at ed though....
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 21:11 CDT
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awsome chappy. update asap, ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Kasha the Wind Sorceress On: June 26, 2005 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update ASAP I love this story it's my favorite!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(yeah yeah, i' being lazy,,big whoop) On: June 25, 2005 21:09 CDT
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great chapter..love riza and her gun reactions. update soon...their locked in *giggles* ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Mistress of Shadows On: June 13, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure know how to make a cliffie Update soon! I love riza's alchemist's name
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Title: LFMAFG!
Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: June 13, 2005 14:14 CDT
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(Loyal Full Metal Alchemist Fan Girl!) I'M ONE OF THE RABID FAN GIRLS!!! -a large crowd of rabid fan girls behind me- I'M THE LEADER!!!! Now, if you don't update again really soon, I'll release the fan girls on Ed and Al! DON'T MAKE ME DO THAT......UPDATE! -all the girls behind me- UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(me being lazy) On: June 10, 2005 23:14 CDT
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awsome chapter..lol i love your authors notes. so funny..update asap, please, till then, ja ne, Zirra
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: me lazy On: June 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
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hmm, good chapter, and i love riza's alchemist name. it fits her perfectly. update asap pleas, till then. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 03:52 CDT
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*Lip quivers.* Why?! Why must you make me suffer with your goody-ness and you cliffhangy-ness?! I forgot to take my medicine because of you?!......just kidding. I don't take medicine. Anyway. Love the chapter oh so much! Alert! Alert! Akira: In the process of making a fanfic about FMA with me in it!!!!(Guess who I'm with, tee hee!)* Does a little weird dance.* Doin' the Happy dance! Get ya groove on!AHHHHHH-subject change- love ya fanfic and for your freggin info I'M NOT CRAZY!!!!.....just been up for 2 days in a row going on cherry coolade and sugar cubes--------:) Smiley----------
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Title: LFG!! (loyal fan girl)
Reviewed By: Tis' sweetums On: June 05, 2005 21:22 CDT
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HI! SOOOOOOOOOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! THANKYOU SO MUCH! -hugglz- I Hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 20:44 CDT
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great chappy, update asap,please. till then, Zirra
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Title: Yay 4 me!
Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the freakin BOMB man!!!!I'm serious! You are like the best F.M.A. Writer ever!!!But that lil Beotch Whats-Her-Face Clara needs to step off cuz shes calling Edward cute names and if anybodies gonna do that.....It's gonna be me! And Riza you my gurl!!! I would've shot him in both feet but i guess the hand is good to. Where the heck is Al by the way. He might get a lil somethin-somethin ciz my cousin goes crazy for a guy in armor. And NO i don'tmean in THAT way you sicko! Oh yeah! I almost forgot! Poem for Edward! I wish I could kiss you tender lips, Or atleast touch them with my finger tips, I love you more every single day, I thank the lord that you aren't gay, Would you catch me if i fell?, Is this love? It's hard to tell?. YAY FOR ME!!!!! I hope you all know this is really hard to say. DON'T SCREW WITH MY FEELINGS!
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