| "The Sweet Scent of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: Whole Story Review
Reviewed By: CausalityStar On: September 01, 2011 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed before, but I think I should just review the whole story instead of a chapter. This whole thing is awesome! It's sexy and funny at the same time. Oh, and you just made me ship Goku/Yamcha. I never thought of that pair before I read this story, but now I love it. Your story does explain a lot of things about the characters, like why ChiChi is cranky and she and Goku only have two kids. ChiChi was a pretty calm person (unless someone frightened her) when she was a kid, so this story does explain some of her being upset all the time. And also, leave it to Bulma to come up with the idea for the four-way. I really liked her a lot in this story. And at least poor Master Roshi managed to coop a feel on her before she punched his face in. I've always felt bad for him for never being able to get a girlfriend, even though I totally understand why girls avoid him in the first place. I think including Roshi made the story even more funny. Let's see, I also liked the Saiyan horny-ness perfume. That was pretty funny, even though I felt that Bulma and Yamcha shouldn't have left ChiChi alone with Goku after she overused it. Poor ChiChi, no wonder why she's always pissed off at Goku. And also, Team Desert Bandit FTW! However, I would be totally happy if Yamcha became the Dessert Bandit instead and showed up to rob the bakery in the student union. |
Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Causality Star On: February 10, 2011 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I don't have an account, but it looks like you can do anon reviews. This is pretty interesting so far. I'm not surprised that Goku knows nothing about sex. And I'm looking forward to the kinky four way. |
Title: *Laugh...laugh...and laugh more*
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really funny. I like the way Bulma and Yamcha here.Especialy when Bulma told Yamcha to do it with Goku, it's hilarious. and you make a new reason why Chichi is over protective for Gohan. * burst to laugh* Please make a continuation with Bulma and Vegeta. Maybe they help Goku and Chichi with creation of Goten?....*laugh some more*
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Reviewed By: minachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 00:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I read the premis for this I was like "There is no way this can possibly ever work". To you I say, well done. Well done indeed. I would've liked to see Yamcha a little manlier, but I'll take what I can get. Good to see some aggressive Goku. Just, good overall. More fics please!
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Reviewed By: Kricket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah, a very good read, Orchideater. Not only do you have a very overt way of displaying the characters' sexualities, but the humorous slant that you add makes it all come together. I also like how you stylized Goku's perception of the things between the sheets. It was very akin to his earlier naiveté. I've read this a couple of other times and didn't bother to leave a review. So now I did. :)
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 10:18 EST
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HAHAHAHAHAH! Oh my GOD! I am dying laughing! *desperately clicks add to favorites link* Yaii! I think I should read this at home and not at work, though... too distracting. LOL!
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Title: The Sweet Scent of Passion
Reviewed By: Drool.... On: April 04, 2007 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marry me. I'm ain't no lesbian or bisexual, but if you marry me, for our honeymoon, you can write me another hot foursome. How about it?
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Reviewed By: Rourinu On: December 27, 2006 00:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* Excellent! A wonderful story indeed! I loved how you ended it ^.^ Very suggestive about what really attracted Goku to Vegeta in the beginning.
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Reviewed By: Rourinu On: December 26, 2006 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! This chapter was HILARIOUS! Poor Goku's just not into it and Bulma's getting all pissy because of it. It was funny how she was threatening him into saying he liked it. *chuckles* Bravo!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 08:23 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I give two thumbs up and applauses. This was fantastic. Very original even though I'm not a big G/CC fan but I had to read it when I saw how many people were involved. Oddly enough I'm writing a story and there is a brief mention about scent playing a role in seeking a mate. Granted it's for another anime but the idea is there. I enjoyed your story and I'm happy to see someone made use of Yamcha without making him into such an ass. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kadeta On: May 08, 2006 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow your fic was seriously origianl I loved it even though I don't usaully like the whole ChiChi/Goku thing. But you really mad it cool. I don't know if it was the Yamcha/Goku thing or what. But anyway I give you Major (!!!!) props for it. Keep it up! Kadeta Royale, Princess of Vegeta-sei
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious, and original! Bulma certainly did seem like a porn star, and I loved how Goku was aggressive. I love his sweet nature in a lot of fics, but he has to act like a Saiyan sometime! I loved it! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! Maybe the night before Goku leaves for the Cell Games or something (how else could they get Goten? :P).
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Reviewed By: Rowina On: September 16, 2005 20:37 EDT
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My goodness--this was so funny! You really captured that DB spirit, with everyone all grown up and so innocent still, no evil Saiyans looming. I love the Yamcha/Goku thing; their time together alone was such a good guy moment, not "gay" at all, whatever that means. Everyone so IC, that was really a pleasure. I did wonder "why" no one went to check up on poor Chichi. . . The Bulma/Roshi moments were fantastic--his presence really added to the fun. The dialogue was great, the writing in general very smooth. I don't remember anything that jarred me out of the story, except the hilarious moments when I had to bend over the keyboard and choke back the laughter. This is the first fic of yours I've read, and I'm eager to read more. I hope this rather lame review gives you some happys for your day! SE-QUEL, SE-QUEL, SE-QUEL. . .:-)
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Title: Gaffaw
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just caught up with this little gem. And I laughed myself silly. Oh my. Hot and hilarious. I adored Yamcha, he was the nicest of the bunch, really wanted to help. Bulma was a hoot, taking part any way she could. And a Roshi moment or two. Wonderful. And poor Goku, forever clueless, except for that epiphany about Vegeta's scent. Yeah. And Bulma keeping the eau de Saiyan "for later". Great stuff!!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 11:43 EDT
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Oh my goodness! This is so original and funny. There's so much I liked about it. It was plausible and Yamcha was so awesome. Great fic!
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