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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*nods* Very interesting fanfic you have here. Full of action and all the other goodies! I'm getting hooked on your recent chapter. The Lacroa episodes were my favorite. :D Thanks for giving the Dark Axis a huge roll. *huggles Grappler* Although, I'm a bit concerned about Fleur. She always wins her battles, she won Zero over with no faults in their love what-so-ever, and her magic is stronger than the Gundam Force. She's turning into a Mary-Sue, I'm afraid. But, I can help you with that. Just make sure she doesn't win all the time and maybe have Zero and Fleur get into a huge fight. That way the love can have a fault. Sorry if I sound rude. ^^; I'm just trying to help prevent corruption in the SD Gundam fandom that the Spyro fandom is suffering because of Mary-Sues. But, all that aside, do continue! You've got me hooked! Or, it's just Bakunetsumaru flinging around a fishing pole and getting the hook caught in my pants... T_T'
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 16:17 CST
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yay!!!..UPDATES..*forms at mouth*...murahahahahah!!!.....^^..niiiiiice
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Reviewed By: GhostGundam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting..please continue..you have a great talent for SDG fics...
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Reviewed By: ML [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 19:20 CDT
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Well I kinda saw that coming. >< I didn\\\'t see the cliffhanger though! So now what? Oh wait. Are they gonna fend off Demonico until morning? But then what would they do about when the next full moon came around? I like all the connections though. Makes the story a lot more interesting. LOL and with Eagle Eye singing and dancing like Tallgeese. Fabulous! Please update again soon. I really wanna know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 00:23 CDT
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I'm sry I haven't reviewed yet. I have family visiting me and it's hard to get on the computer. Lucky seems pretty cool. I thought it was funny when he and Guneagle met for the second time.I can also understand him not believing Fluer when she said she was his dead sister. What she did to prove who she was was funny though. I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 17:57 CDT
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LOL XD Now THAT was some good quality humor right there. It does kinda seem like D.G. is the root of the problem when you're lookin from their POV. Azural is so sweet. Wonder is anyone else in gonna show up in Neotopia? 9.9 Can't wait for your next update FeatherDragon, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:11 CDT
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OMG IT'S SO KAWAII!!! X3 and didn't EagleEye end up destroying those two anyway? I think you should just do DG. Much easier to read and write. I like how you had them play keep away with the crystal ^^ So that's why EagleEye is keeping the trio around. So what next? I must know! Is EagleEye gonna turn Zapper and the others into demons like he did with the zakos? Or, now that he knows about the spirit, he'll send someone to retrieve it or he'll go there and try to destroy Skylar. You always leave so many possiblities that I can't predict what's going to happen. That means your're really good. Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
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You had more spelling errors this time. I'm still waiting for some more plot change. Even though I'm not a big Zero/OC fan, it does make the plot slightly more different from copying SDG so... v.v; lol, yes, it does help to try to sleep at 1 am ^^; later
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Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 09:13 CDT
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Yeah! Two demons survived...wait, now Eagle Eye will destroy them cause they lost. That was funny when the demons got scared away by the fake spirit ^^ So now that the demons have been defeted once again, Fluer is better I wonder what's going to happen? A full scale invasion? Chapter focused in on Zero's feelings for Fluer? What? >_< Please update soon so we can read more.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
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Mmm, nice fight, although I DIDN'T like all that reference to the one-on-one of BakuvsAshu. =/ So Fluer okay right? Still hoping for more angst. Solid writing style. Update sometime soon v.v (Oooo... Mod. That's bad O.o wonder why they said that for THIS fic? Sure, it's probably very true for MY fics... ^^; but I'm still waiting for a warning first. We're not really using this as a board when we refer to the other authors... right?)
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Title: sorry I'm late
Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 17:38 CDT
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Hey. Finally read the 11th chapter. I LOVED IT!!!It was the best one yet. Keep going Feather Dragon and update again soon please.
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 13:05 CDT
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Hey. Sry it took so long for me to get here. My computer is broken again so now I have to do this at school. Even though I enjoy action it's nice do read a chapter like this one every now and then. I thought it was really funny how Fluer told the zakos to get lost and they actually listened to her lol. Still I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon please. PS: Thanks for reviewing my fic.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:19 CDT
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ack! review messed up, I said this----- x.x Anyway, still, see what I said with all my other reviews. aww, darn, I think you should make them all almost die and have Fluer save them *evil grin* hey, it would show girl power, lol!! sorry,lol , ignore me, I'm a bit too sadistic ^.^;
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Title: sorry I haven't been on in a while, school and comp screwing up life x_x
Reviewed By: RW [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry I wasn't able to review the last few times, everytime I clicked the review button my comp would freeze x.x Anyway, still, see what I said with all my other reviews ) lol, ignore me, I'm a bit too sadistic ^^; Yes, only a bit. See my review on april 9th, coz my opinion hasn't changed within the last 9 chapters... T.T; Which basically means this will bore me soon if there's no change. x.x I know you're trying, in fact I'm not entirely sure you would be writing if I didn't tell you to write your own fic instead of bugging me ^^;;;; which I'm still sorry for. I hate writer's block. okay, enough from me- update soon (with changes please) v.v;
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Reviewed By: Melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 06:26 CDT
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That's awesome. Those black metak beasts are so cool. I wonder what the gundams would do if the went against a dragon......oh well. Once again great job. It's getting better and better. I wonder what the demons are going to do now that Demon General an all three DA commanders have gone on their indivigual missions. Suspense is a killer I tell you, but it's my best friend. Keeps a story interesting. Update again soon anyway and I'll continue to read it any way I can.
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