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Reviewed By: Anime Fetish On: July 11, 2005 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's getting better, although this chaptr was very short, I will give you credit, because not many chapters come out well when an author has writer's block. I liked the hickey part, my mouth was curling upwards as I read it, but whatever. I can't wait to see what happens next, but I'm confident that something will happen, not sure what it is, but I know something good will come out of it, or maybe I'm wrong, after all today has been an off day for me. I can't wait until you post the next chapter, I'm actually anticipating it, I can't stand Houjo, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: nubian_rose On: July 10, 2005 22:39 CDT
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no way! let kagome kick his scrawny ass! u know she could! hojou deserves 2 take 2 arrows 2 the chest & 1 in his thick head!
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Reviewed By: nubian_rose On: July 10, 2005 22:39 CDT
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no way! let kagome kick his scrawny ass! u know she could! hojou deserves 2 take 2 arrows 2 the chest & 1 in his thick head!
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Reviewed By: Anime Fetish On: July 05, 2005 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, it's gotten better, that much I can say. I always knew there was something about Houjo, I mean, come on, who's - that - nice? I know that kagome's afraid to let Inuyasha into her world because she's scared he might get hurt and for the love of the lord, Kagome is a miko, she could burn Houjo, but she's in her world, she's not in the demon world or the Feudal Era. Inuyasha wants to help her out and it's sad because Kagome is shutting him out and Inuyasha should just tell Kagome how he feels, you know? But he's shy and afraid and I love the way you portray them because they are so much like the anime characters. Excellent job!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-chan On: July 02, 2005 23:16 CDT
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Aww poor InuYasha he just wants to protect Kagome, but she can't let him because of what might happen if people find out about him. Thats so sweet they just want to keep each other safe. Great chapter, please update as soon as possible thanks.
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 16:14 CDT
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Wonderfull chapter. Inuyasha thinks that she is ashamed of him but she's not. She knows her own time and how they have to scientificly prove everything. Sheeesh!! Just look at Area69 for example O_O The alians atopsys and junk. Anyway Hojo seriously is a....well I think I told you that before. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 14:59 CDT
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Get Inu to kill Houjo... bwahahaha... dirty pervert. -.- *lol* Oh well. Love chapter nine. Go wild with 10.
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 18:40 CDT
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Ah, I love this story. XD Houjo the stalker. I LIKE IT! O___O Does Houjo have psychological problems?? >>
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:47 CDT
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Hey, this is great. I can't wait until you put out the next chapter! Hojo is very twisted in this, waaaay different from what I'm used to reading. ~Xak
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeesh! What HAPPENED to that boy to make him such a nutter? Great updates, great story. I'm still enjoying it! ~Xak
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a creepy little poem. Nice update, if a bit short ;)
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that first chapter is a shocker. I think a little overuse of 'fuck' but other than that, great. ~Xak
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:42 CDT
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^_^;; woopsies! my computer is being weird and submited my reveiw from last time this time o.0 *hits computer* Update soon!
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Title: Hojo's true self
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, nobody is that nieve. Way too nice. Personaly if you ask me I say Hojo's a rapist O__O *nods* it's a theary i've had for quite some time now *pulls out knife* DIE YOU EVIL SON OF A B****!!!!! *stabs Hobo repetitively before pulling out matches and gassoline and burning him at the steak* I am not a violnt person ^_^ I just lothe Hobo!!! Great job!! update soon. *loggs in and adds stoty to favoirtes*
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Title: Hojo's true self
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed (not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 11:49 CDT
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Yep, nobody is that nieve. Way too nice. Personaly if you ask me I say Hojo's a rapist O__O *nods* it's a theary i've had for quite some time now *pulls out knife* DIE YOU EVIL SON OF A B****!!!!! *stabs Hobo repetitively before pulling out matches and gassoline and burning him at the steak* I am not a violnt person ^_^ I just lothe Hobo!!! Great job!! update soon. *loggs in and adds stoty to favoirtes*
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