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Reviewed By: Anime Fetish On: July 05, 2005 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, it's gotten better, that much I can say. I always knew there was something about Houjo, I mean, come on, who's - that - nice? I know that kagome's afraid to let Inuyasha into her world because she's scared he might get hurt and for the love of the lord, Kagome is a miko, she could burn Houjo, but she's in her world, she's not in the demon world or the Feudal Era. Inuyasha wants to help her out and it's sad because Kagome is shutting him out and Inuyasha should just tell Kagome how he feels, you know? But he's shy and afraid and I love the way you portray them because they are so much like the anime characters. Excellent job!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-chan On: July 02, 2005 23:16 CDT
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Aww poor InuYasha he just wants to protect Kagome, but she can't let him because of what might happen if people find out about him. Thats so sweet they just want to keep each other safe. Great chapter, please update as soon as possible thanks.
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 16:14 CDT
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Wonderfull chapter. Inuyasha thinks that she is ashamed of him but she's not. She knows her own time and how they have to scientificly prove everything. Sheeesh!! Just look at Area69 for example O_O The alians atopsys and junk. Anyway Hojo seriously is a....well I think I told you that before. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 14:59 CDT
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Get Inu to kill Houjo... bwahahaha... dirty pervert. -.- *lol* Oh well. Love chapter nine. Go wild with 10.
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 18:40 CDT
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Ah, I love this story. XD Houjo the stalker. I LIKE IT! O___O Does Houjo have psychological problems?? >>
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:47 CDT
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Hey, this is great. I can't wait until you put out the next chapter! Hojo is very twisted in this, waaaay different from what I'm used to reading. ~Xak
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeesh! What HAPPENED to that boy to make him such a nutter? Great updates, great story. I'm still enjoying it! ~Xak
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a creepy little poem. Nice update, if a bit short ;)
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that first chapter is a shocker. I think a little overuse of 'fuck' but other than that, great. ~Xak
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:42 CDT
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^_^;; woopsies! my computer is being weird and submited my reveiw from last time this time o.0 *hits computer* Update soon!
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Title: Hojo's true self
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, nobody is that nieve. Way too nice. Personaly if you ask me I say Hojo's a rapist O__O *nods* it's a theary i've had for quite some time now *pulls out knife* DIE YOU EVIL SON OF A B****!!!!! *stabs Hobo repetitively before pulling out matches and gassoline and burning him at the steak* I am not a violnt person ^_^ I just lothe Hobo!!! Great job!! update soon. *loggs in and adds stoty to favoirtes*
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Title: Hojo's true self
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed (not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 11:49 CDT
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Yep, nobody is that nieve. Way too nice. Personaly if you ask me I say Hojo's a rapist O__O *nods* it's a theary i've had for quite some time now *pulls out knife* DIE YOU EVIL SON OF A B****!!!!! *stabs Hobo repetitively before pulling out matches and gassoline and burning him at the steak* I am not a violnt person ^_^ I just lothe Hobo!!! Great job!! update soon. *loggs in and adds stoty to favoirtes*
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Reviewed By: Anime Fetish On: June 18, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, and I feel that you're right, Houjo is a little - too - nice if you ask me, I guess everyone hides behind masks, ne? In a way I find him a bit OOC, but then I can't really call him that because the Inuyasha anime doesn't really delve into personality traits when it comes to Houjo, he just seems like your average, ordinarily nice guy, not some kind of creepy stalker. But then again, you'll never know, so I guess reading this story is good because it helps answer some of the questions people might have when it comes to Houjo. I also find Kagome to be a little - too - naive in this fic, or maybe just really dense, not sure which I want to stick to, as of yet, but I hope she just knocks some sense into Houjo or maybe Inuyasha can do that, seeing as how he - is - the overprotective, possessive boyfriend as Kagome's friends would put it. Anyway I really can't wait until you update, and I hope it's soon
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-chan On: June 18, 2005 00:03 CDT
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great story! when i was reding the last line my mom knocked on my door and i jumped up. please update as soon as you can. i can't wait for when InuYasha and Hojo meet!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 17, 2005 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats cool how Hojo did that in a spit second. Can he do that? Oh, thanks for telling me!! I was getting a little worried!!
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