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Title: reallyu hot story
Reviewed By: juanjoseso [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was hot is it done or there is more please don't stop
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Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your story and it has gotting good so when you get a chance please update soon.
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Reviewed By: monkeyman1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry my last rating went wrong i just click submit without choosing anything
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Title: pls upload 1 week more chapters plssss
Reviewed By: monkeyman1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
hello your story of one week is very nice can you plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss upload more chapters on it............. plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss this one of the best stories ive ever read thanks in advance i really admire your work ncluY
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Title: great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Zaara the Black [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON
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Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow... *All other comments are written by previous reviewers* Rateing on the completion of this fic...
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Reviewed By: KageChidori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
cmon update its such a great story, its amazing
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Reviewed By: KageChidori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 23:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol, hope u update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Ransumi On: September 26, 2005 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!! =D Can't wait for the update. Keep up the good work. =D
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Reviewed By: Till On: September 23, 2005 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has a somewhat repetative tone over all from chapter to chapter, but any short comings are made up in fold's by the originality of your story and that stands out in a very positive way. It's good stuff, please continue.
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Title: Dang
Reviewed By: Tury: The master of Mediocrity On: September 22, 2005 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this awhile ago and stopped checing for updates less than recently. Guess I need to be more patient, huh? Can't wait for the next chapter, I am VERY intruiged as to what will happen next. -Tury
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Reviewed By: Havenoname [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is good man! I like it a lot! Especially at the end were Naru gets sent flying to the wall. You have grammer mistakes here and there, but it has not distracted me from reading your fic. I hope you can have the next chapter come out soon. Havenoname signing off!
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That the way to end a chapter kicking Naru ass. Plus the rest of it is good too, so keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Schwarz On: September 12, 2005 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
About time, a was getting worried since this is one of my favorite stories. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took ya long enougth!
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