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Reviewed By: sbg On: June 26, 2011 12:17 EDT
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I really liked this whole fic. its amazing. its funny, its insightful and it does a beautiful job of describing charachters. If you would like to update again soon, i know its been a while, but if you would, all of us would be incredibly incredibly and overwhelmingly happy:) |
Reviewed By: roxxihearts [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahahaahhaaha!! xD gosh i love you. i was kinda expecting this sort of reaction from kakashi ;D wow you make everything flow together so well! o-o it's amazing! plus the smex is hot all by itself ^^ can't wait to read teamwork 3!!! =D
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Reviewed By: Nadene On: May 29, 2008 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing. I've ready all the teamwork stories like 3 times. I cant wait for you to write more. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 22:43 EDT
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err.. I guess it's better that those two were in.
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Reviewed By: Sakura2838 On: August 31, 2007 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fanfic, but I don't usually like threesomes and this is the first Naruto fanfic I've read!! Though I've read many others of different animes. Nevermind that, I just thought, what if the child were twins??? Wouldn't that be awesome, it could be some kind of weird thing where one could be from Naruto and the other from Sasuke or something. Sure, I'm crazy, but I just had to get that idea across. Use it if you like. Good luck with your fanfic!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: anonymous5 On: August 25, 2007 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. Very creative. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: soursummer On: August 14, 2007 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't read any Team 7 fics - they are either too cliche or too... out there for my tatses. I also don't usually do threesomes, but I'm glad I took a chance with this fic. It was really well written, as was the first Teamwork. I liked the way Sasuke was written - I could see him doing some of those things. I missed Kakashia dn Jiriaya, but that's probably only becuase they're my favorites. Good job over all.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 00:29 EDT
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It was inner Sakura that had stood up to Kyuubi, right?
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Reviewed By: Bunny_Queeks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT PLEASE WRITE MORE
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Reviewed By: musicalphrase(not logged in) On: July 30, 2007 17:58 EDT
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See, that one little sentance after the "Naruto didn't need to push him," whatever it actually says? That's all it needed!!!! Just to put the boys on even keel with one another in regards to their care for Sakura. It demands that they be equal with each other in the relationship, if nothing else. I loved every bit of it, and it was fun to read it all again. And Cripes!!! o.O I didn't realize how long the chapter was!!!! Fantastic work, as per usual, looking forward to reading more, very happy with what you left us. ^^
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Reviewed By: ledfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG! double kyuubified sasuke molestation ftw :P lolz Another fantastic chapter I'm so happy you got it out. p.s. what do you mean you write for your OWN amusement? You write for me and that's FINAL so get working :P lol
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: Waterdude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very much enamored with this story so far. The plot is great, the characters feel realistic, and most importantly you've managed to create "people" who readers can empathize with. The pairing is a bit unconventional, but really, that makes the job you did even more impressive. Please keep up the good work, and thank you for writing.
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Reviewed By: DarkAspects 1819 On: May 11, 2007 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEWrite more you have to. Anway, sasUKE is a naughty boy did he still a makeout paridise volume. Now i am not saying put smut in this fic but if you could do another side fic that would be fabulouse. Ja NE
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Title: aikotakara (not logged in)
Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 02:18 EDT
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omg why havent you finished this D: i lurves this story, please update it soon!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to say I'm absolutely floored that your English was entirely self-taught through the internet. I've tried a few other fics from non-English-speakers and they've all been difficult to read, despite the effort they put into their work. Your attention to grammar, sentence structure, and especially your vocabulary convinced me that you were British at first. Concerning the fic - To be honest, I've never understood the appeal of yaoi. I'm not a typical male who cringes at the thought of boys kissing (two of my best friends are gay, so I've developed a bit of a tolerance) but it's still not something I want to read about. Still, I daresay I'm enjoying this fic. Not for the yaoi, not even in spite of it, but because it's a genuinely good story. I hope you find the time to update it in the near future.
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