| "A Slave to No One" Reviews/Comments [ 182 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 20:34 CDT
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YEAAAAAAH! for the update, great chappy can't wait for more, please update asap...pweeeaassee. Zirra
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Reviewed By: not login in On: May 01, 2005 19:03 CDT
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I think good so for I hope you up date soon P.S I hope you put sess I think he will be good to the story, from jtcl
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Title: ooooh! i likey!
Reviewed By: temtation of the soul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh! that is beyond mean! i read fast and i hate ending storys in the middle, so you better update soon or....or.....arg! update! ((don't take this the wrong way, i'm not normaly this violent))
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tried to rate your story as well as I could to give you as much of an idea as possible what I thought of your story. Your style of writing is overall fairly good, though sometimes a bit flat, though that can be explained through the fact that English isn't your first language. But really, you write better than a lot of people whose first language IS english! LOL And your spelling and grammer were lacking because of that as well, but it wasn't at a level that it was really annoying or to where it distracted from the story too much. Though finding a good beta reader would be a good idea (I personally think everyone could use one). ^^ Your originality and such got a higher number because the story IS very good and takes several interesting twists that made it stand out to me enough that I continued to read it all the way through. And obviously the enjoyment factor was high if I actually stuck around and read it because I've been hunting for a good fic to grab my attention for several days now, and this was it! I was suprised when I couldn't stop reading because I've been in such a fickle mood lately. ^_^ Overall I really, really enjoyed it and was impressed with your work! I'd read part of one of your previous stories, and I must say that your writing has improved a great deal since then, and it seems to gave gained a lot of maturity. I'm impressed with how far you've come and I hope to see more of this story VERY soon! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: April 28, 2005 22:26 CDT
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Font Color hello again its me...^___^..i love how the story is going and all..I still really want to know how that demon got into the castle..i know that it may not be important but something about not knowing buggs me..hehehe..well anyway excellent chap..love the That Kag can turn into an almost full demon..Oh and i just love the lemon..good job with that..oh poor kag ^_~..well can't wait to see what happenes..^__^..update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 00:44 CDT
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awsome chappy, can't wait for more. love how Inu-chan's blood effects Kagome-chan so much, that was a great idea and all that, well update asap, please and bye 'till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: April 27, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome's going to have a baby!!!!!^_^ Em I right?
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: April 24, 2005 17:35 CDT
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Don't feel too bad, you should see what some would-be authors who do speak english do to their stories. I'm a spelling Nazi and I admit it. I can't stand a story where I have to puzzle out what the person is trying to say every step of the way. You're also missing the posessive form in what you write : Inuyasha's, Inutaisho's, that sort of thing. Will the Shikon be making an appearance in this story?
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: April 24, 2005 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey no worries about the english..i have noticed somethings but what the heck who can't over look that just for the great story that ur writting here..I really loved the chap. and want to comend u on the speedy update..i mean wow that was really fast and thx for that..I would love if u would in the next chap. tell us how the deamon got into the castle..I thik that this is one of my fav fics and i'm very very happy with it..I'm suprised about not having a beta..i'm inpressed..ur doing a great and don't let anyone tell u other wise..well have a nice morning,noon, or night depending on when u read this..ja ne ^__^
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: April 24, 2005 00:34 CDT
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You have a fantastic story. I'm amazed that you don't have a beta. I'd beta for you if you like. Just send me an email! But still...really great story! This was a more fluffy chapter. I enjoyed it. The Kagome and Inuyasha fluff was overdue. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 22:04 CDT
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I love your stories and considering you had to learn english as a second language your fic is one of the best edited ones i've ever read. and i know english is hard, i'm amarican and i still have trouble with some of the grammer and crud that is my written language, i couldn't imagin trying to learn it as a second language or such. *shivers in fear* no thanx. :D Zirra
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(too lay-z) On: April 23, 2005 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
total kawaii, i love that chapter! be sure and update soon k. but i g2g ja ne
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: April 23, 2005 16:51 CDT
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I like this story, but your spelling leaves much to be desired. THRONE as in the royal seat is not spelled THROWN. That spelling means to hurl something. There are other errors, but this one was the one driving me up the wall. Spellcheckers only catch errors, not sound-alike words. Please be smarter than your spellchecker.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 23, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo... if you were gone on a busniess trip what do ya do for a liveing you have made me curious!!! ^__^ well anywho i loved it like i always do keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: April 23, 2005 12:30 CDT
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Wow. Okay just wow. Beware of the possessiveness. I l ike how this is written, Hobo...err Hojo is so screwed, and in not the way he would prefer.
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