| "Another Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: It sounds great so Far Do more
Reviewed By: Kagome_and_Hiei_Lover On: April 11, 2005 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was great so far. Keep it going. A Kagome and Ed pair is realy good. If you do in the Full Metal Alchemist world great. And to have Kagome with autometal is realy cool. Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: princess_of_light [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome changing into a chimera....NO NEVER how would that go into the story who would want to be a chimera try powers like she doesn't need a alchemy circle like ed that will work better
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: lgko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i'll think about you suggestion, but it is my story...MY STORY!!!! so listen up i'll keep trying to get it on the site but if it does not work go to FanFiction.Net and i will post it there instead untill further notice
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! there's not even a chapter~! thats not fair!totally NOT fair! ?I mean Come on! it sounded so great i clicked the link but then i find out THERE'S NO FUNKIN CHAPTER! GRRRRRRRRRRRR SO MAD AT YOU! DON'T MAKE HER have that power~~~~! give her something else like power over wateror ice or even the elements!
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Title: lgko
Reviewed By: lgko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it is me the writer i was going towards the Kag/Ed pairing but you people can vote on a pairing of your own just remember Kagome is the only Inuyasha character in this story k? now how the hell do you get a story on to this web site , it is so much easier on FF.net so please help me people!!! review the answer
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
about kagome turning into a chimera...NO...the plot already sounds solid and it doesn't need anything to glorify the characters....just have Kags able to alchemize stuff without a circle thingy like Ed...what are the pairings for this story?
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